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LegionofPony


I write commissions and sometimes write stuff I come up with too. Nuff said.

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This is pretty good, despite me not personally enjoying the milking fetish. I especially liked it when he started to lick her clit while it was winking.

...and then Apple Bloom found the weird 'milk' in the fridge and took a big chug. She'll never look at milk the same way again.

I bet she instantly vomited, because expecting milk and getting that? :pinkiesick: Poor Bloom.

6746834 Thanks, glad you liked it at least a little!

Mac started to softly ungulate his hips

Now there's an amusing typo.

Over 1k views in under 3 days since posting? Wow, thanks guys! Glad you like my weirdness!

6752904 Next time you write something weird, it might get featured!

I'll put this on my Read-Later list for tomorrow. Being milked, while not one of my top fetishes, is certainly on the list. My favourite fetish is consentual nonconsent, AKA rape :twilightsheepish:

6752987 so, psudo-rape you mean. I actually have a story idea like that I outlined, and planned to start writing soon... :P

6753048 Pseudo-rape IRL, but when it comes to fan fiction the more realistic the better. That much is expanding on what's simply an illegal act IRL, but I know quote a few people that share the my fetish too. Fantasy in fanfiction allows people to explore darker and more intense sides of their fetish without physically harming anyone or anything.

6753059 Psudo-rape irl isn't illegal, provided both of the partners are consenting to it occurring before the act itself comes into play. It's basically just acting out a fantasy in a controlled way, in which nobody is harmed.

Got the idea reading from reading this story and this one too, and decided to try my own hoof at this kind of story, but with my own twist and additions.

I freaked out a little bit when you linked to my story as a source of inspiration for this, and immediately started reading. All I can say is YES YES YES! I loved how you got Applejack involved, that was pretty hot. :ajsmug:

Yay 2k views! Glad you like my perversions!

OH... MAI... GAWD!!!!

This is absolutely awesome in the fact of you little author's notes at the end are hilarious. I must read more of your work, and hope that you continue writing more.

6809537 Well, I'm glad you were amused by my author's notes. I saw another author doing it, was amused by it, and decided "hey, why not do something amusing like that myself?"

I'm glad you enjoyed the story as well, and hope you enjoy my other stories as well if you choose to read them too! :pinkiehappy:

Sexy!
I was kind of hoping the two of the would actually 'do it'

6819630 well, in this story I decided to focus mainly on one 'different' act instead taking of a more typical route. Who knows, maybe I'll write a sequel to this... :raritywink:

I enjoyed the anatomical accuracies of this quite a bit.

6839085 Thank you. I try to make all of my stories as anatomically and behaviorally correct as possible, in most respects, to real-life equines, I prefer realism in my stories....well, as much as possible in stories about talking horses who can fly and cast magic which can literally teleport them and/or others, or alter natural forces (IE. gravity).

Anyhow, glad you liked it!

This is both sensual and funny. Didn't give me a boner though, don't know if that will change though...

6845474 well, glad you enjoyed it, in any capacity.

7017857 Small point here.

"Eeyup, so long as Ah can stop at two."

I don't think 'Ah' should be capitalized the way you do with the word 'I'.

7018688 I use 'Ah' in this case as a self-identifying pronoun, so therefore I treat it the same as I would 'I'.

Great clop here. I was sort of hoping that Big Mac would pull out of the milker and thrust himself into a different "milker" toward the end, but still quite hawt.

Poor Apple bloom...

"Ah wanna watch." Applejack suddenly stated with a lustful tone, taking another step towards her stunned brother.

Are you sure you just "wanna watch?" Wouldn't you like to engage your sweet mouth instead of the milking machine? I know I would like you to!

Big Mac, however, moaned loudly as he started he to thrust harder;

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