Sweetie Belle thought it would be harmless, she thought it would wear off after awhile, she thought Twilight could fix it... She thought wrong. Can the teenage filly keep her hormones in check, and keep her small problem a secret?
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While I like the main content, I feel this chapter's grammar and spelling needs to be fixed up a little.
Also:
"Cast it"? Cast what exactly?
So was this chapter the opening of "pandoras box" so to say
Very interesting to see Sweetie Belle basically lose control because of her lust lol, can't wait for more!
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I used pro writing aid...don't tell me I paid 35 bucks for a years worth of a useless program!
glad to see she's not totally traumatized by the alternate timeline but still not happy that those 2 bitches are using her. come on deathsia you are the author can't we just send them off to some hole in the wall country as sex slaves. hell silver won't care she'll get more dick then a glory hole.
but honestly I do love this story as much as futa just isn't that appealing to me the way the story is written makes me want to keep reading it (and bitching lol) hopefully after the next 22 chapters in this story we'll see scootabelle a thing and them with their own foal(s) as they enjoy a wonderful family life.
or 62 tons of cum stuffed in a silver flea bag, which ever cums first. ^^
6829240 Computers aren't perfect at grammar correction since human language has so many special cases and rules.
Looking back over the chapter, there aren't as many spelling errors as I thought, so ignore that.
I guess what I meant was, parts of this chapter were a little hard to understand, while this seems to be rarer in the other chapters, like what I pointed out previously and another example:
I understand what you were trying to say here, but not without thinking a bit too much about it. The paragraph could be revised as:
Do you catch what I'm saying?
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OH! In other words it slowed you down...I guess pro writing aid was right when it said that paragraph was a 90% sticky sentence and should be revised...
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Context hints to a possible ejaculation spell--essentially it sounds like a spell that either increases the amount of baby batter that is created, or even that it's a spell that gave either Tiara or Spoony a very virile penis. My money's on the second one, since they are teasing Sweetie Belle about her penis and Spoon is recalling a previous time where she probably was creampied pretty good. I also think that even though Tiara claims that she's a lesbian, she's go no issues with using a strap-on on Spoony, so getting some unicorn to make her a temporary one that works seems to be what happened...Tiara's probably the kind that will give all, but doesn't want to take it (primarily colts putting their dicks in her, hence she's claiming she's a lesbian).
.....man, I'm reading too much into it....
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To be honest, I'm kinda shocked no one has caught onto my mini-shout out to a comic I like that has yet to be finished by anubuthecat.
On your theory however, you were close but Silver Spoon was referring to a spell that basically allowed the colt in question to cum so much into her that it magically inflated her belly. Long story short: Silver Spoon has an cum inflation fetish.
a good chapter but at the same time something is not right with Sweetie Belle there is a side effect to her problem but I am wondering just what it is going to be.
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I think I know the comic that you're referring too. I have to say that he's got it cliffhanged in a quite perilious spot...
Awwwwww, Tiara blackmail ponies just for Spoon's sake. Twisted but sweet. She probably haven't her cherry poped yet.
I'm pretty sure it isn't the case. Tiara seems to like watching, not showing. She is the voyeur, not the exhibitionist. My guess is she loves staying in control, hence the blackmail and the disdain for colt's dick, and see the penetration as submission.
And now she is jalous cause she can't please her Spoony as much as Sweetie.
Good clop btw.
OMG that was beyond awesome..I hope she fucks Dinky to soon.
A nice, sexy return to the classics. Despite the deplorable characters involved, I loved every minute~ My bisexual mind was going crazy.
Plus the beginning. D'awwww. I'm surprised those two haven't figured out which big secret the two bullies know about yet...
Oh my
I hoped for a chapter like this, but with sweetie's reluctance I expected her to just lick Silver Spoon and leave but then....
Silver just unleashed a Beast of a Belle
I look forward to reading more after some sleep.
Sexy, but I still can't believe Sweetie went through with this. Those bullies needed to be stopped with Silver Spoon STILL a virgin!