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Noir de Plume


~"If you want it to make sense, YOU say it."~

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This story is a commissioned work for Omny87.

Captain Capsize is one the most feared pirates of the Six and 1/2 Seas. Scourge of Equestrian waters, she is known for her devastating ability to capture a ship without firing a single shot, and rumors of her steel barbed half-horn only further the fearsome image she projects.

But when ill-tides and dead winds bring poor fortune to her crew, the blame is misplaced, and poor Capsize finds herself without a ship to sail.

Can this "Albatross" find her wings?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

Not a lot to go one, since it's a pretty short chapter, but I see nothing obviously amiss, so have a little encouragement!

6308538 Awww, thank you! It'll be a short two-part story. :twilightsmile:

That Pipsqueak.:rainbowlaugh:

Neat little story so far. As has already been said, there's not much to say yet.

6308836 Going to try and have it out soon!

Well written, but it goes against the natural gentleness of the Ponies of Equestria. :fluttercry:

So I assume Pip was reading a story in this one chapterand this Captain inspired him to want to be a pirate? Or at least why he loves pirates so much, I guess.

Seems promising. The first chapter could have used some action, but I guess that was well enough left to the imaginations of a young and impressionable colt and its readers.

6348853 Pip is more in there as a nod to the canon show. The story is just a one-shot about Capsize. :)

6348938 Ah, guess the incomplete was just an oversight. haha. oh well, cute nonetheless.

Complete? But I was tracking... :trollestia: well, however you want to update it.

I half expect Capsize is related to Fluttershy somehow.

Now this was an interesting read. :twilightsmile:

Well this was amusing.
Wouldnt mind seeing more of her adventures

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