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Fire Feather


I am a pegasister who likes writing. And ponies. So...yeah. Don't judge my stories too harshly.

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What would life be like if all of Equestria's villans roamed free? If Nightmare Moon defeated Celestia, Sombra ruled the Crystal Empire, and changelings were a daily threat. Oh, and Discord wasn't a statue. When an unknown evil threatens the Princess and kidnaps the Queen, all of the Princess's friends must rise to help her save the kingdom.

Sex tag for some suggestive dialogue.

Other tag stands for: The rest of the Main 6, Celestia, , Cadence, Soarin, Chrysalis, Discord, Changelings, and maybe the CMC

If I copied some other story, I am very sorry. Please notify me.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 15 )
Comment posted by Mizuko deleted Aug 11th, 2015

Fair amount of spelling/grammar/punctuation errors strewn throughout this. Still, I like the premise and execution so far, so I'll Track it.

6305855 There are? I thought I double-checked it. Huh. Can you point them out in a PM please?

I am going to watch this story.
Alternative universes can be so much fun.

Whatever I say probably will not fit what you have in mind.

I really am enjoying this reality, especially with those two as an item. :raritywink:

6536145 Yep! That ship is one of my favorites!

Pinkie could be the chef of the castle, or a member of some sort of Chaos Corps, under Discord's leadership. Or her alter ego, Pinkemania Diane Pie, could be the Drill sergeant for one or all of the armies.

Rarity could be a seamstress for the royals, or kinda like pinkie, a Mage trainer for one of the armies.

Spike could be introduced in a number of was, like he cold be a rebel leader, and due to not being twilight's assistant, he is slightly older looking and stronger due to his small horde, or he could be the personal guard of one of the queens(Nightmare or Chrysalis) or princesses (Twilight or Amethyst). He could even be the Captain of the Crystal Army. In any of these, he could have wings, magic, or both. His flames could even be a different color, due to being raised differently.

Going good so far, keep it up. For now, have a stache' :moustache:

I'm glad this is got a new chapter.


And oh yeah Spike!!!! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

This story is awsome loving it so far. :twilightsmile: and SPIKE!!!!!!

:rainbowderp:.......not sure if Twilight evil or Twilight good.....

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