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I am never serious.

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Last, and certainly the least to climb down the stairs was Granny Smith. Ew.

No description, just ew.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::twistnerd::trollestia:

We are throwing sex at the wall here and seeing what sticks.

Kinky

Following this with interest. Would like it to go well but either way i liked this introduction, keep up the good work.:raritywink:

Braeburn should get what he wants with AJ, but you should probably give Applebloom's age to keep it from being really creepy. Also, I think Braeburn is acting less like a horny pervert, and more like a rapist.

6311283 I made sure to state on the first line of the description that everyone is 18+ but you're right, it is a point worth repeating for this story. And the next chapter will be much more consensual between AJ and Braeburn.

I hope 'insect' in the description is intentional.

6315546 It's a call back to first story's description where I made the same mistake.

I think Braeburn's mission should be succesful in every way.

you end one clopfic and make a another one....
*suddenly ROCKS*

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6315837 make him manipulate AJ by telling her in breakfast something like "thanks for the show last night" or something like that. Also I can really see this AJ having an exhibition fetish and Braeburn taking advantage of it and making her into a complete pervert through it.

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I think Braeburn should get everything he wants out of this...

Only for Big Mac and Granny to come home early, intending to surprise the trio, and walk in on them all going at it.

Hey, is this dead?

6601452 Not dead, just writing some other things while I plan out the exact specific details of this story.

Question, when AJ was having that wet dream was she thinking of Twilight and Big Mac/Shining Armor? The line about a naughty dream between Twilight and her brother makes it ambiguous.

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And then join in, right? /)

6601970 Dude, this was last updated a year ago. I'm pretty sure this is dead.

Enjoyed the chapter, I hope more comes out soon.

I hate it when a good story die

damn it why do the good incest stories I find are canceled?

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