I am a typical 14 year old Brony who has seen some shit...
Based off the original story Cupcakes by Sargeant Sprinkles. This is what i think would be the aftermath of cupcakes. This story is about a filly and a colt who are trying to solve the case of the missing ponies around ponyville. Hope you enjoy my story. Took me about 3 months to write.
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Poor fluttershy
Hello I think i can help you... your story is about 7/10 above average instead of scripting like for a play try narrator format.
I hate the story cupcakes*starts to shiver uncontrollably*..........
7158570 This story was very short and rocky. It was my first story too, so it was pretty bad.
7158991 I'm not talking about your story, I'm talking about where your urge to write about the aftermath originated!! *Shivers harder* And everyones going to have a rocky start here an there!
Just look at my first fic.........
7167495 Thank You.
7167698 Np!!
7158570 Too bad... Oh, I forgot, I need help for baking cupcakes, mind to help me?
7378667 Pretty funny. Just, if you don't mind me asking. What's the secret ingredient?
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and Gizmo Gear too
YOU silly
*take a knife, start laughing in a creepy way, and use some power to teleport Pinkamena to help him*
Heh, felling generous... Pinkamena, give him a quick death, I'll go catch lil' Gizmo. IT'S TIME FOR A PARTY
7380218 Lol Please don't kill us... we're just innocent story writers trying to have fun...
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*chose* Oh! F**k it!, *release them* go BUT don't tell anypony or anyone OR ELSE...
*teleport pinkamena at his side* She's gonna have a LOT of cupcakes*teleport pinkamena back to her dimension* Hope that was clear, I'll be seeing you.
7389131 I don't even know anymore... what is life... lol thanks for the friendly conversation Hope to see you in more of my comments. Just don't murder anyone else...
7378667
*shivers*