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Hudibadudi


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Friendship is magic, yes, but sometimes that magic fades and dies. What is there left that you can do when it does?

Just a little story I threw together to vent some frustrations.

Cover image belongs to Hasbro.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

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HEARTBREAKING. :fluttercry: Why must you do this to me?!

6284032 I know. Same here. :fluttershysad:

6284032 It's always easier to write from personal experience.:raritydespair:

Comment posted by Midnight SparkleLulamoon deleted Aug 6th, 2015

I think that what people is waiting is to understand something. Your storytelling is not bad. I like the way you describe the feelings and how the character live them. From a story like your story, I want to read the evolution of the whole. I think it will be better if there were more descriptions on how their friendship become weaker. However, I liked it. ^^


,Peace from Midnight.

6289373 Hmmmm.... You're right, it probably would have been better if I had done that. Oh well, I can't say that I was exactly happy with how this story turned out, but I really didn't know what else to add. I always think of stuff after I post the story or people comment with ideas on how it could have been better and then I think to myself, 'Yeah, I could have done better if I had thought of something like that.' As long as my next story is better, then I guess I'm doing something right. Thanks for liking, by the way.

6290051 I like how you think. :pinkiehappy:

As long as my next story is better, then I guess I'm doing something right.

Well say! :raritywink: I will read your next stories.

A crush wasn't involved, but this otherwise matches the load of ended friendships I went through especially after going to a different middle school than the rest of my friends many years ago. Good job w

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