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Yeah, I bet that's just what yoni10014 wanted.
Also, the story sucks. I'd explain why, in an attempt at being constructive, but... no. No. I don't have the time or willpower to go through this. It's just a poorly-written clopfic. There's nothing more to say.
6280743 Shut your mouth. If it's bad then how about you write one.
6281142 Ironclad rebuttal right there.
6281147 Sorry
, but I'm not sure if that is sarcasm or you're siding with me.
6281164 Unfortunately for you that was sarcasm. You don't need to be a chef to know that your food's bad and the same applies for writing fiction. Instead of getting annoyed at negative comments, inquire about what you could do to improve your work and do your best to apply it.
6281204 Well, sorry I'm new with this okay. it's my first one so I didn't expect it to be too good and i react to negative comment like that anyway. If you want to try a better story try the other one I posted 'I'm Sorry Octavia'.
6281204 Also, if you want to edit it that'd be nice.
I'll give you your credit and whatnot.
Good but at I would have made it a bit more lengthy and detailed because O.C.D is a c#%t.
But over all 8/10
6300193 thanks.