OctaScratch-The Movie
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I hope they do eventually get together.
Moves too fast in the start, a lot of telling but no showing, weird characterization, little description, and poor layout. I'm no literary master, but I know a good story when I see one, and this just isn't it.
Shame too, considering the premise is golden! But you know...
Polish this up and I think I can enjoy this story, but for now, I must dislike...
a curious story here
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Maybe you should take the idea and make it into a great story if you like it. I wouldn't mind.
I’m hoping that one day you’ll continue this story as it is a great story.