Her eyes were closed, but she facing something solemnly as if in quiet vigil.
The rocks in front of her were large, heavy.
that first sentence i think should read " Her eyes weren't closed, but she was facing something..." as for the second line, remove the comma and put an "and" there. dont need a comma for only two adjectives
srsly, sequel plz?
put glowing in front there.
that first sentence i think should read " Her eyes weren't closed, but she was facing something..." as for the second line, remove the comma and put an "and" there. dont need a comma for only two adjectives