Jul
27th
2015
On Re-Writing, and Why I Am an Idiot · 8:33pm Jul 27th, 2015
Hey pony peeps.
The problem with being new to a site is that it all takes some getting used to. It's something everyone has to go through, but sometimes, when you're just plain dumb, it actually legitimately hurts the people you care about. Namely, my fic.
So! Just as an update.
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AnonymityIsMagic · 349 views
· Story: Kingdom of Loving: Fear and Loving in the Crystal Empire
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#rewriting
Hey, recently reread your story, and two things. One: having guards only wear helmets as armor is a TERRIBLE idea, because a; their junk is exposed making it an easy target to double someone over over and kill them, and b; the rest of their vital organs and arteries are free to slice/stab/bludgeon to death. Two: in the comments there was mention of a sequel, is this in the works?
I don't suppose you are thinking of a sequel are you?