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6281312 Thank you for the feedback! It really does mean a lot and I do understand where you're coming from.
I'll agree that it is fairly generic right now, but I do have some big plans. I do try to be original when I write, but unfortunately this story requires this kind of introduction, which is a little off putting. I understand that the reader wants something fresh and exciting, but I am still in the very early stages of this story. To be honest, almost all of the chapters up to this point are an introduction to the bigger plot, which will be a lot more interesting. There is so much more story to tell and I hope that people will actually give it a chance and look past the slow and generic start up.
Because there is so much more to tell, I am struggling to find the balance between detail and story. There isn't a lot of detail now because this kind of beginning has been used over and over again. There will however be a lot more focus and detail in the future, since I'll be finally writing the original and interesting idea I had to begin with. I know that it isn't really a good reason to gloss over some things but the faster I can get to the main story, the faster the audience will read something that is new and fresh.
Please don't think that I'm not taking the beginning seriously, I am. There are a few little hints to what the future has to offer and some key points are established. I just want to get past the generic opening and begin to write something different.
I also understand that I'm nowhere near the best writer. I do occasionally make mistakes and I'm always looking for help. There will be a lot more show rather than tell later on, since I'll finally be getting into the good stuff. I am still relatively new to this so any feedback at all is great. I wish I could show everyone just what I have in store, but it'll have to wait.
Thank you so much for the comment! It really does help a lot to get some honest feedback. I hope that you continue to read the story and give it a chance!