Mrs. Linda Sweetstuff was over joyed to hear her son was taking a weekend off to come home to the community on the shores of Lake Parthenope, little did she suspect a few "unexpected quests" would be dropping in as well.
6266327 only with Tsukune not afraid to actually show how he feels and having no gripes with having three girls have the hots for him, I have drawn from that show a bit in coming up with this series i admit, but i still wanted to give it some of its own identity and flare in its own right
6267185 cool I like that finally there is a protagonist that is in this situation and will act on there feelings instead of being afraid.(loving the story so far btw)
6268227 glad to hear it, I do tend to throw references here and there in my stories (just look at one of the chapter titles and the comments for proof of that) but unlike say seltzer-burg or if you want to hit closer to the mlp home double rainboom, I try to have a reason for the references being there beyond just acknowledging they exist, IMO you can make references to or even retell established stories so long as they have a context or you fix the problems or go a different direction to what you using.
Nice, this was a good appetizer. We see how closely connected the girls and John are connected. We also see how tolerable John's family is. Good chapter and it was a great set up for the next chapter
I also Agree with InfernoTheFox it reminds me of Rosario+Vampire I completely get you drawing from the series. You also did a good job using it in your story.
6269018 i didnt want to strawmen the parents to the point where they'd be unlikable, just to where they're more over protective over their son, and the notion of him in a polygomus releationship while shocking is there( especialy to the mother) i want the idea that they'll learn to accept it to be clear
that just reminded me of Rosario vampire
6266327 only with Tsukune not afraid to actually show how he feels and having no gripes with having three girls have the hots for him, I have drawn from that show a bit in coming up with this series i admit, but i still wanted to give it some of its own identity and flare in its own right
6267185 cool I like that finally there is a protagonist that is in this situation and will act on there feelings instead of being afraid.(loving the story so far btw)
6268227 glad to hear it, I do tend to throw references here and there in my stories (just look at one of the chapter titles and the comments for proof of that) but unlike say seltzer-burg or if you want to hit closer to the mlp home double rainboom, I try to have a reason for the references being there beyond just acknowledging they exist, IMO you can make references to or even retell established stories so long as they have a context or you fix the problems or go a different direction to what you using.
Nice, this was a good appetizer.
We see how closely connected the girls and John are connected.
We also see how tolerable John's family is.
Good chapter and it was a great set up for the next chapter
I also Agree with InfernoTheFox it reminds me of Rosario+Vampire
I completely get you drawing from the series. You also did a good job using it in your story.
Good luck
6269018 i didnt want to strawmen the parents to the point where they'd be unlikable, just to where they're more over protective over their son, and the notion of him in a polygomus releationship while shocking is there( especialy to the mother) i want the idea that they'll learn to accept it to be clear
"cares about me"
Also that ending