Mrs. Linda Sweetstuff was over joyed to hear her son was taking a weekend off to come home to the community on the shores of Lake Parthenope, little did she suspect a few "unexpected quests" would be dropping in as well.
6231804 somewhat, but she doesn't really mind, so long as they'll always have that couch...and maybe something else....maybe...
really even though these stories are "sequels" to each other the only realy connection is they use the same characters following one series of event to the next...more like episodes of an actual EQ series than anything
She practically was in tears of shock and disbelief as the girls stood casually at the top of the stairs waving her pointer at them like something out of a low brow anime comedy and whined..."Would you mind explaining why there where three girls in your bedroom? ""actually I was in his bathroom to be honest," Chimed in Aria, making Mrs. sweetstuff practically faint in disbelief. "
yes ik you cant word it like that in the actual story but it was the only way to fit the SP tag around it
6233371 it's already awkward enough when you have to introduce your parents to your first love...but how do you explain to them how you have three first loves without looking like a gigolo? and when two more girls are spending the weekend in the neighborhood?
So...any thoughts on the story so far? i'm always looking for feedback
Update: omg i just realized your the author of castus and the human pony war series! your work inspired me to answer the call of the fimfiction writer!...I dont mean to sound starstruck but...if i may be so bold as to say, it's an honor to have you comment here shadowWalking
I'm actually reading the first one before this so I can get caught up with all the info. I'll give a full review once I catch up, though this story is definitely something to read by its description alone.
And what are you talking about? It can't be that hard to introduce three girlfriends. Right?
6233874 maybe, but remember the sweetstuffs...they aren't bigots or all that backwards in their beliefs, it's just they have a very archaic way of thinking, the Mrs. especially, she thought it be a big thing to accept Jhon having one girlfriend, like just one that he'd go steady with until he makes and honest woman out of her like something right out of an episode of leave it to beaver or father knows best. but its basically amounting to "oh hi him mom glad to see you after this time have you met the three girls at once i'm dating?" yeah thats why its going to be very awkward when i get around to that little bit, and the lead up to it wont help either
also what do you mean by first one from the beginning? you mean taco bar right?
so apparently another dazzlings fic exists that uses the same cover as mine only slightly cropped...i just would like to go on record and say my cover is supposed to be the girls gathered around the back patio of a house posing for a reaction to the realization that they all shamelessly date and do things with the same guy...opps
I think I know where this is going...
Interesting story. Still, is Harshwhinny aware of John having three girls already.
6231804 somewhat, but she doesn't really mind, so long as they'll always have that couch...and maybe something else....maybe...
really even though these stories are "sequels" to each other the only realy connection is they use the same characters following one series of event to the next...more like episodes of an actual EQ series than anything
6231731 Would you like a preview?
She practically was in tears of shock and disbelief as the girls stood casually at the top of the stairs waving her pointer at them like something out of a low brow anime comedy and whined..."Would you mind explaining why there where three girls in your bedroom? ""actually I was in his bathroom to be honest," Chimed in Aria, making Mrs. sweetstuff practically faint in disbelief. "
yes ik you cant word it like that in the actual story but it was the only way to fit the SP tag around it
The description itself tells it will be a funny story.
6233371 it's already awkward enough when you have to introduce your parents to your first love...but how do you explain to them how you have three first loves without looking like a gigolo? and when two more girls are spending the weekend in the neighborhood?
So...any thoughts on the story so far? i'm always looking for feedback
Update: omg i just realized your the author of castus and the human pony war series! your work inspired me to answer the call of the fimfiction writer!...I dont mean to sound starstruck but...if i may be so bold as to say, it's an honor to have you comment here shadowWalking
6233571
I'm actually reading the first one before this so I can get caught up with all the info. I'll give a full review once I catch up, though this story is definitely something to read by its description alone.
And what are you talking about? It can't be that hard to introduce three girlfriends. Right?
6233874 maybe, but remember the sweetstuffs...they aren't bigots or all that backwards in their beliefs, it's just they have a very archaic way of thinking, the Mrs. especially, she thought it be a big thing to accept Jhon having one girlfriend, like just one that he'd go steady with until he makes and honest woman out of her like something right out of an episode of leave it to beaver or father knows best. but its basically amounting to "oh hi him mom glad to see you after this time have you met the three girls at once i'm dating?" yeah thats why its going to be very awkward when i get around to that little bit, and the lead up to it wont help either
also what do you mean by first one from the beginning? you mean taco bar right?
so apparently another dazzlings fic exists that uses the same cover as mine only slightly cropped...i just would like to go on record and say my cover is supposed to be the girls gathered around the back patio of a house posing for a reaction to the realization that they all shamelessly date and do things with the same guy...opps
Is John the grandson of Prim Hemlines?