Mrs. Linda Sweetstuff was over joyed to hear her son was taking a weekend off to come home to the community on the shores of Lake Parthenope, little did she suspect a few "unexpected quests" would be dropping in as well.
6238067 one last quick question, what do you think of the character John Sweetstuff? I have over the course of the series tried to paint the picture of a character that, yes does "get around" but unlike Quagmire from family guy or boomhauer from king of the hill, I wanted to give him admirable traits and personality beyond that, would you say i pulled that off well enough zod, my friend?
6240026 there's actually one earlier in the previous chapter
"You don't know how hard it is...was, is being a poor girl with such...talents here in this world." She said giving a little pout that would make Sonata blush if she'd been awake. Followed by a soft flutter of those lashes of the gleaming rubies she called eyes. John bent low over her just inches from her pretty face, almost nose to nose.
i was going to go all in and have the next bit of dilouge be almost word for word to eddie's but i thought that'd be too on the nose
sorry this one chapter came up a bit short, hope you still found it enjoyable.
This is getting hot!!! By the way, love the title of this chapter!! Hahahahahaha!!!
6238029 Did you get the reference?
6238038
Yes Jessica rabbit
6238040 was it fitting? I just hope it fit the idea behind the chapter
6238045
Totally fits for the chapter
6238053 Thank you, It does my heart good to satisfy my loyal followers with new material. and im glad your enjoying the story.
6238062
Your welcome and keep being awesome.
6238067 one last quick question, what do you think of the character John Sweetstuff? I have over the course of the series tried to paint the picture of a character that, yes does "get around" but unlike Quagmire from family guy or boomhauer from king of the hill, I wanted to give him admirable traits and personality beyond that, would you say i pulled that off well enough zod, my friend?
6238090
John is good the way he is.
You made a Who Framed Roger Rabbit reference...
I officially love you now
6240026 there's actually one earlier in the previous chapter
"You don't know how hard it is...was, is being a poor girl with such...talents here in this world." She said giving a little pout that would make Sonata blush if she'd been awake. Followed by a soft flutter of those lashes of the gleaming rubies she called eyes. John bent low over her just inches from her pretty face, almost nose to nose.
i was going to go all in and have the next bit of dilouge be almost word for word to eddie's but i thought that'd be too on the nose
so....any other thoughts on the story?
The soul thingie was neat. Though going from zero to scantily clad cuddles seemed like a bit of a stretch.
Ah well, to there next chapter