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Bonk6


Hi, I'm Bonk. I'm Bonkers. I am the author of FanFics.

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Starlight Glimmer finds a way to get her revenge on Twilight, only to set in motion things worse than she expected. Making it so the Mane 6 never become the Elements of Harmony, she entirely changes everything you knew about Equestria.

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were did you get this idea from?

Beautiful! Keep going!

So, Nightmare Moon will cause enteral night leading to Discord being set free leading to chaos enteral, Changelings will conquer the ponies, Sombra will return and enslave the crystal empire and Finally Tirek will consume the world's magic.... Starlight you are now the Equestrian Anti-Christ.

6219968 The animatic for the 2-part finale.

My theories regarding this story's beginning, and the following events are different. Read my blog post to figure it out.

6221519 This story was inspired by the animatic, though everything past Starlight being around the map are my own ideas. It isn't meant to be my telling of what will happen in the finale.

6220778 Starlight has dun goofed

Just to point out, Pinkie Pie's talent isn't rock farming. It's making ponies laugh. Just because the rainboom never happened doesn't mean suddenly her talent changes. She just didn't find her calling and is stuck on the rock farm, cutie markless. :derpyderp2: If your talent doesn't make you happy, it's not really a talent.

Starlight starts putting two and two together, remembering Nightmare Moons threat, and changing Twilight's past, and now this. "...Crap."

Gee, I think she's finally starting to realize just what she's done.:facehoof:

'Bout time, don't you think?:facehoof:

Starlight you narrow minded insane unicorn. Enjoy hell bitch.

Gosh! This is so interesting! I feel like I'm watching the season 5 finale right now! :pinkiehappy:

Starlight, you have simply bucked up! :facehoof:

The chaos capital of the world! :raritystarry:

Honestly, what's so bad about chocolate rain?

Seriously, Starlight? Don't you think it's a little too late to realize that? :facehoof:
Anyway, this story is amazing so far! It feels like an episode from the show! The only problem is that it feels rushed. Please continue with a slower pace.

-Henry101

Great chapter! I still feel it's a little rushed, but that's okay. I wonder if Starlight is going to ask for Twilight's help now?

6229057 Thanks for the feedback! I agree that I tend to go a bit too fast paced, it's just how I write. I'm glad you like my story still though!

So Sombra thought he could control the most powerful being on the planet? A reality warper with knowledge in mind manipulation?

Great. The hormones part was really funny. Now, Twilight and Starlight to save the day...or the present...or the future? Whatever!

Sunset! :pinkiegasp: Well, I guess she's stuck in a warped version of Equestria for 30 moons. :derpyderp2:

Looks like Discord has become more evil...and it scares me, actually. :fluttershyouch: Anyway, it was another great chapter :twilightsmile:

Discord was never evil, just selfish and childish. This is a discord that wants to be evil :twilightoops:sombra what have you done

So, Starlight was shaking her butt in everyppny's faces :rainbowlaugh:
Starlight Vs. Starlight made me feel dizzy :derpyderp2:
Now, onward to meet Twilight's friends! :rainbowdetermined2:

(Sees the Title Description)

Well time to get a Time Machine and Stop This Paradox

Damn, son. It's pretty amazing how you managed to actually get the first little bit of Cutie Re-Mark down right to Starlight propping her legs up on the table.

I like how Discord totally pwns everyone. The stories where he's easily defeated annoy me. He's a CHAOS GOD, not some shadow villain or a shapeshifting Queen who can cast a few spells. Sombra and Chrysalis are powerful, but nowhere near Discord level power. I loved how Discord shook off their pathetic 'attack' and easily imprisoned them.:pinkiecrazy:

Will you have Fluttershy try to help and or befriend Discord? Even though they're not friends in this universe, it'd be interesting to see them somehow become friends in this one. And maybe she could reform him while she's at it, so that it won't be so difficult for when they need to time travel and undo Starlight's @#$% up. If you'll pardon my language.

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