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Americanwastelander


Welcome sit down and I'll tell you a story...

Comments ( 17 )

It looks like proper word capitalisation is just a silly myth :applejackunsure:

6264465
It's my first story and I have horrible writing skills to boot sorry

Edited the description and title

New World, Great Discoverys

After suffering defeat at Tirek's trickery, Twilight and her friends are cast into a void that lands them in the wasteland, where they meet a hero who with his Cyberneticaly enhanced body and arsenal of dangerous weapons. Theu may be their last hope to save equestria.

Fallout is owned by Bethesda Studios
(Don't copy this in. No Hasbro credit is needed)

Special thanks to:

DarkShadow95 & WhoNeedsSanityAnyways

Thank you both for your help. Without it I would've never started.

It's rough I know it insulated chapter's will get better

6264859 fixed. Sorry its 11 PM here and I'm tired.

6264880 I can understand, nice avatar. He looks like a JRPG or an action game character

6264890 its the aged up Hope from Final Fantasy :pinkiehappy:

You need a beta. This story has pretty much no grammar at all, and that makes it a really hard slog to get at the actual story. Straighten that up and it will help a lot.

7500814 I'm actually surprised anyone is still reading this story after maybe over a year of negleckt. I need a editor but every time I try to find one it never works. And grammar has always been my problem.

9175923
If you want the job at this point I need one desperately send me a pm

Is this story on hiatus or can I consider it canceled:applecry::raritycry:

10152012
A very long hiatus I'll come back to it, but its gonna be some time.

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