Gumming

Fluttershy has to go to an important meeting somewhere, but also needs to desperately find Gummy. She decides to leave while letting Angel Bunny with the task of finding that weird alligator.

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Celestia

Celestia #1 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

And so began the most prosperous relationship in all of Equestria. Also, what?

abandoned2123

abandoned2123 #2 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

Okay, I had to come here for the tags alone.
While the story is cute and short, I don't really see how it warrants a romance tag. It seems more like a little friendship drabble than anything else. Then again; I'm probably just being dense.

Zixinus

Zixinus #3 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

Angel, despite his bossy attitude, is a prey animal. Gummy is a predator. I can't help but imagine the two's interactions as Angel loudly proclaiming that he will have nothing to do with Gummy and clearly pretending that he is not afraid of him... only for Gummy to scare the willies out of Angel.

By the way, bunnies' tails aren't just made out of fluffy fur: they are flesh and bone. Pull a rabbit's tail hard and they WILL NOT appreciate it (in fact, they dislike you poking at their tails, they can't see whatever your hand is doing).
An alligator biting down on a rabbit's tail, even if said alligator is toothless somehow, would be like an adult standing on your pinkie finger.

DJ DASH3R

DJ DASH3R #4 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

Yeah I think GingerNutGin was right, the romance tag might be wrong. Random, maybe? But romance proably not.

SkyWalker

SkyWalker #5 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

636713 No, I agree with you, this definitely doesn't go for romance.

Nice fic, not much romantic, but fun nonetheless

thewaffler

thewaffler #6 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

Thanks for making this 100% clean because this could've gone so far in the far opposite side of the spectrum.

TheSnowyPegasister

TheSnowyPegasister #7 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

This is very cute. Glad to see your picture came out amazing. Peace

Agalakachikaboum

Agalakachikaboum #8 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

636713>>636961>>636918

I know, but I blame FIMfiction for that! Why isn't there any 'cute' tag?! Whyyyyy?! It's the only one that fits this story

abandoned2123

abandoned2123 #9 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

637394
Well; it is random. Maybe that would work?

Agalakachikaboum

Agalakachikaboum #10 · May 23rd, 2012 · · ·

636991 Don't worry, I hate writing clopfics.

Mad Library Scientist

Mad Library Scientist #11 · May 24th, 2012 · · ·

Just from the description alone, I'm surprised you didn't title it "Gumshoe," since it apparently involves Angel and the Mysterious Disappearing Derpigator.