Princess Celestia tells the mane 6 how she earned her majestic cutie mark.
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Why are there no wings on her in the picture?
737231 Whoa, I never realized XD sorry, but I'm not the one who made the pic.. I'll try and find a better one.
737349
Meh. I'm not picky, just realised they weren't there. Is all. Plus, criticfags will be all over that y'know?
737352 I'm not scared of those, they rarely come to me :)
May I request a Luna sequel?
Awesome!
But... The first guy is right for the pic
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Anyway, you did a good job for the story! ^^ I like it!
D'aww. Now we need to see one about Luna xD
Wittle Celestia....
Nope doesn't sound as cool as Wittle Luna
The story is great, its cool to see your take on it all.
BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO AND BRAVO! HAVE MY MOUSTACHES!
Lovely :) Now we only need to hear Luna's story.
Also, silly Luna, you do good things all night and day :P
Celestia is best little pony!!!
aww poor Luna needs self esteem
It makes me so frustrated to see such beautifully woven tales with grammar mistakes.
That made her raise her eyebrows, which was good. “Well, to do that, you must at![...]
You must eat.
Sometimes I forget how sensible my little sister was...
...how sensitive. (Though very similar-sounding, the two have radically different meanings.)
She looked up to give back the embrace. “I ate everything in my plate,” she whispered.
...ate everything on my plate.
I guess that has a logical explanation that Decade can give me an a second. I continued looking around, what Ifor was nowhere to be seen.
...Decade can give me in a second.
...I continued looking around, but what I was looking for was nowhere to be seen.
I hate to be that guy, but it drives me crazy to see a main header have imperfect grammar!
Also, I notice that the Royal Sisters do a whole lot of bouncing back and forth between the formal Equestrian "Olde English" style of speech and modern-day speech. I can understand that the former is harder to write, but you really should pick one or the other.
-Sometimes I forget how sensible my little sister was, and when I realize it again it made me want to cry. She was so teary about every single thing. She was the most sensible pony I’ve ever seen in my life, and trust me, I’ve seen many. - you mean sensitive probably?
748875 True. Sorry, I was mixing up English and French there ^^;
I reviewed your fic tonight you can find it here