Hi everybody, I've decided to start writing here in hope of having a good time and improving my English skills, considering I'm not a native English speaker. Hope you have fun reading what I write !
Basically the plot of this story is that one day, even though it started like every other day, Pinkie Pie goes pretty much insane with fear, and it's up to the rest of the Mane 6 to help her out, in a peculiar way ... I won't make any spoilers for now obviously. Have a nice read, chaps.
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Interesting so far, but a few things.
I think you meant 'half'.
Also, 'get ready for another adventure' sounds like something Rainbow would say.
Also, using 'said' over, and over again is not a good idea. Use 'replied', or 'exclaimed' or something else. I'll keep an eye on this story, though.
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Whoops, my bad I'll correct the mistake right away.
Anyway thanks, I'll be sure to remember not to repeat certain words, don't know what happened there.
Interesting, interesting, you have my attention now, but I have a problem with this.
Again, sounds like Rainbow Dash.
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Why can't I get this right ?
I'll try to fix this, I need to watch a lot of Twilight episodes again then, I'm determined to make Twilight speak like Twilight
6285943 Hey, it's just in my opinion, so don't feel stressed.
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Well I'm not stressed, I just try to see if I made some errors and try to improve on them, it is the greatest method of improving after all, and every comment/opinion is welcome
this story is great so far!
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I'm glad that you are liking it
Thank you
can't wait for an update!
Continue... O.o
Reminds me of my own story actually xD
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Well, yours is a really good fic anyway
Well I read your story, and my reaction was ''Oh gosh, you're right !''
Well gang it looks like we have another mystery on our hooves.
Into the wild mind.
Get shufflin'