Oh Shadow, oh Shadow, you are running out of time,
and i should know this for time is my domain,
you must leave this life of strife, and live a life so fine,
and make some friends, 'fore the end,
if in this world you wish to remain.
alright, not gonna say much, this is my second fic, first person, gonna be ALOT of OCs, so you have been warned. I'll be updating everything as it happens.
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Did you spell 'Ballad' right, or were you aiming at having it spelled like that?
32132 oh, snap, thanks for pointing that out, i'll go fix that right now.
Ohgod! OC KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!
On a side note i'm going to go ahead and advertise my story, it's about pinkie pie from cupcakes killing OC's, it's rather funny if i might say so myself.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7539676/1/OC_LoLocaust_for_great_justice
warning, it's pretty shit and was done in 2 hours, so don't expect a work of art.
It's about time someone broke Rainbows knee' she can be such an annoying cunt sometimes.
33641 EPIC LOL! now, i have nothing against rainbow dash, but she needs to learn to know when it's a good time to stfu and walk away, am i right?
Alright, i just noticed that the link i put on this chapter didn't work, so i'm just gonna say this for anyone who ants to know what the song is, it's a ponified version of "I'll fly away" by Hank Williams Sr.
Awwwww yeeeaaah. Needs some editing and a clarification on the rank of Detective Sergeant:
Plain clothes Detective Sergeants are equal in rank to their uniformed counterparts, the prefix 'detective' identifies them as being trained in criminal investigations and part of or attached to CID. They also would come straight out flashing their badge around. :3 But it's still good.
oh... whoops.... well, it adds a bit off comedy to the story, right?
go luna
rarity is a bit if a criminal yeah and now I dont like celestia in this story but luna fuck yeah
63734 ikr? i was really trying to make it seem like equestria had some real world issues and stuff like that, and that was the result.
LOL I'm not really surprised that Luna did that since she used to be nightmare moon i know that she only did that to get Tia to improve prison security
I'm don't care what you say but I think Rainbow Dash deserved that for not getting out
can't wait for fourth chapter I'm about to read the third
I can't fucking wait till the next chapter this is epic
twilight I do not like you now at all
scratch that I missread it
78918 lol, i was about to ask why to.
now mt real comment fuck you law luna is beast and a quick letter=get out of jail free card ha take that
not to mention the element of generosity knows a fence that says something
As much as I dislike my OC being turned into a giant arse, I liked this chapter. xD Hopefully she'll get a redeeming scene. *nudgenudge*
79050 hey, she was just doing her job, and trust me, she will have her moments of glory(maybe not from Nick's perspective, but she will have them)
I wonder what job princess Luna has for Nick
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i i i...... FUCKING LOVE THIS GUY! GET HIM A MEDAL!
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MINE PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED! THE MOST GLORIOUS STORY OF THE THIEF HAS UPDATED!
The pony on the cover image looks kinda like ponified Shadow the hedgehog.
1305484 ...... Well shit, I hadn't noticed that....
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I am Shadow the pegasus, the Ultimate Pony!