• Published 16th Jul 2015
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On the Run - darkmage1997



A mix up has an unlikely hero being sent to prison while his evil twin uses their exact likeness to get close to the Royal Jewlery

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The end?

In the halls of Canterlot castle, ponies were all gathered, all dressed up in formal attire, "My loyal subjects. We are all gathered today to celebrate another momentous occasion. In addition to the real George Cunningham being finally arrested, eight new princesses are to be crowned today," Celestia announced. This incited a round of applause from the others, "Now, please help me welcome the Equestria's newest princesses, Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Babs Seed, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, Dinky Hooves, and Twist," she announced, as the eight fillies all entered the throne room in regal dresses. Once they arrived at the alter, the eight bowed their heads, as Celestia placed eight different crowns on their heads. Once they were crowned the new princesses, they were led out onto the balcony, where several ponies were in attendance, cheering for their newest princesses.

"Oh, my little muffin keeps growing up!" Ditzy tearfully said, as she hugged her daughter.

"You girls have achieved one of the greatest titles in the world. You should be proud of yourselves," Twilight said.

"Yeah, but will this mean more chores for us?" Scootaloo asked.

"Well, once you girls are old enough to lead along side us, then yes," Cadence replied, motioning to herself and the other three alicorns.

"So, it gives you girls enough time to enjoy your youth," Luna said.

"We have a banquet ready in the dining room. But, before that, would girls like to give some sort of address?" Celestia asked. The fillies all shook their heads.

"We never really thought that far ahead, so we don't really know what to say," Silver Spoon replied.

"Well, since you girls don't have an address to give, lets just go eat," Discord said, as the ponies in the throne room all left, leaving the family to head to the dining room, with Equestria's newest princesses.

Later, the gang was back at the Castle of Friendship. Just as they were about to celebrate, they heard a door slam. They saw Toby panting, using his arms to keep the door shut.

"Toby, what's wrong?" Nathan asked.

"Those fans... It's happening again..." Toby stammered.

"Don't worry, Toby. We are all with you behind the way." Silver Spoon objected.

"Actually, I plan to leave it to me this time." Toby replied.

"How?" everyone else asked.

"I'll show you." Toby smirked as he went outside.

Fans squealed for their hero as he got on the center of Ponyville Hall.

"Toby!" fans squealed.

"Listen up, everypony!" Toby called, getting their attention. "I know you are all wondering what I felt being locked up in jail while my evil twin took over. Well, I felt devastated, that it was like being treated by my Daddy, but it was WAY more harsh when it comes to the big house. And to celebrate the capture of my evil twin and my return, I will sing a popular song."

Vinyl trotted up to Toby and gave him a microphone. And so the song begins.

"Well, that settles everything. Good night, everyone!" Toby called, while having another group hug with his family. Suddenly, they looked up to the night sky, seeing fireworks explode. Toby smiled as the fireworks took form of his family, and a huge firework shaped heart came to the center of them. It was the best night of their lives.

"Sweetie pie, that was beautiful. You seem to be our right friend in our hearts." Silver Spoon complimented.

"Yeah. Over the years, you've were our main support of Equetsria." Cory said.

"Thanks, guys." Toby replied.

Meanwhile, in the Maximum Security Detention Center, George Cunningham was getting ready for bed, when suddenly Shadow Mavis was brought to his cell.

"Hi. What's up?" George said.

"Err, there is something I must say to you." Shadow Mavis stammered.

"What do you mean?"

"I'm sorry for hurting your enemy, Georgie. I just want us to take over Equestria to have our revenge after what Celestia betrayed us for." Shadow Mavis said sadly, as she started to cry.

"It's okay. I forgive you what you did." George said, as he kissed Shadow Mavis on the lips. "We all make mistakes."

"Thanks. Good night, sweetie pie." Shadow Mavis said, as she went to her cell.

George blushed and watched her go to her cell. But then, his phone rang. George picked it up.

"Hello?" he said.

"Ah, George Cunningham." the voice replied.

"Hello, Uncle. What is your business?" George asked.

"I have seemed to found out you were outsmarted by that boy and his family."

"I know, right?" George blushed.

"Well, I have a proper mission for you." the voice said.

"Oh, and what is it?" George asked.

"I want you to gather your friends to get revenge on that boy and his family. I've sent a present for you to start your plan."

"Oh, and what would it b--?" George said, but stopped when he saw a shiny object flash in his pillow. "I'll call you back." He carefully inspected the object. It had a red light on top of it, and it looked like a helmet. George couldn't help himself, but he put it on, and something changed about it. He had one red eye, and grew taller. At this moment, he decided to sleep. His plan won't come until some weeks. A song was suddenly played out of nowhere, which only George can hear it like his own theme in his dream. What he saw was a army of monkeys. They looked at George in wonder. George smiled evilly and and started to sing in a deeper voice. Note: The Ape Escape Monkeys can sing too.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vHP4VbhtGJ4

"I'll be back very soon, Toby." George chuckled evilly. "Very, very soon."

Comments ( 41 )

6388185 I'm not that good an artist

6388537 How do people draw pictures of Toby and the other OC kids?

Before I begin reading I'd just like to say pancakes. That is all.

6475759 Well, the other kids are the Children of Harmony. Kids to the beings of Harmony.

6475804 Plus, George Cunningham should be a fighter in Smash bros! But he'll be a copy of Bowser Jr, right?

6475827 Yeah, an angel like him doesn't belong there, right?

6475869 Hope you steal your brother's stuff back. Plus, chapter 6 will be kind of heart-punching.

6477212 He cares for nothing! I can't steal anything from him and get a reaction. He just sits there on his phone like a potato with arms!

6478223 She is a fan of Toby since Toby's Days in Equestria.

6478201 Maybe you get along with him when you're playing Smash Bros 4 with him?

6478569 We get along. He just randomly decides that he wants to be a butt and steal my stuff. It's more annoying when he get's angry at me for being mad at him. That's kind of twisted when you get angry over someone being annoyed at you.

6478656 Yeah, I just got a bit more time. I'll read 2 more chapters. Sorry, but I only binge read when I get insanely into a story and that only happened once. Fallout equestria was a master piece for that.

6478849 Well, Rainbow did went to a spa in that Gabby Gums episode.

6478866 What do you mean "solid alibi"?

6480629 What I mean is that framing her is almost impossible because unless I read something wrong she was always with someone during the heists. If they were trying to pin her as the mastermind it would be easier, but I doubt they thought to do that.

6480626 Didn't they force her to go there?

6480724 Uh, no. Rainbow likes to go to the spa without any of her friends knowing.

6480721 Well, Pinkie is the happy and stealthy one, so they thought she might be behind the crime.

6480728 :facehoof: You sure? I'm pretty sure that was one of the stories the CMC made out of context.

6480730 True, but it's hard to pull a crime when you're talking with someone and they not notice you.

6480758 I suppose I didn't say that very well. What I mean is that their are ponies that can testify that she didn't commit the crime because she was with them. If the crime was in a whole other building (Which seems to be all of them) then it would be extremely difficult to pin it on pinkie.

6480780 You'll pick up by the next chapter.

6480780 George will have a final battle with Toby in the next chapter.

Alright,again I don't like the alicorn thing, but that's because of it being so sudden and feeling out of place. The rest of the story however I enjoyed even though it's not my preferred type of story. I don't really have much to add other than you did really good. Chapter's rating is one unsure aj :applejackunsure: while the entire story earns a smiling pinkie. :pinkiesmile: Thanks for writing!

Comment posted by The Mysterious Lombax deleted Oct 2nd, 2015

6485154 I don't see how I could really do that. At most I can give this story a shout out, but that could backfire on you guys. I don't want to cause more harm than good for this story.

6522667
It's a title, not anyones name.

Good chapter

George Cunningham will be back! :pinkiegasp: I can already imagine what his evil laugh would be like. Maybe this!

I hope he will be back in a future story or past.

6393470 your story is good

Very based on the muppets: most wanted. I'll take a deeper look later into the week. As of now it seems to catch my attention so good job so far.

6793373 where there is smoke there is fire

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