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Flutternight

The CMC (Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo) slept at Fluttershy's cottage for a night. They dreamed the same dream. With a dark creature who's following them around and messing with their minds, they tried to survive the dream world, finding more places.

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Crimsion Ink

Crimsion Ink #1 · Jul 7th, 2015 · 1 · 1 ·

Its...actually not bad for a first time. Plenty of begginers mistakes, but it has a interesting plot idea. Its just really rushed and you need to let the readers know a bit more of what's going on. It felt like a movie being fast forward. Try and slow down in future chapters, okay? other than that, not bad. And I dont even like dark stories! 5/10!