"However, that said, i refuse to neuter my stories to not contain any sex in it at all, especially when it is such a part of the plot. This was psuedo rape, i am intending real rape, and worse in the coming chapters. Life is not pretty, some times that darkness gets the better of us."
I applaud this attitude. Real life is not pretty, and being afraid to let that show in something like this wouldn't sit right...
Thanks! I always love to hear somepony enjoys my work. I'm not sure i'll have another chapter out tomorrow, but i should by friday.
I also do enjoy the little suggestions people give, I'm not sure i was planning on expanding too far on the reaction of the princesses, but i'll let my mind play with that idea, and see what i come up with.
I think the worst part of my process is that i don't use outlines of anything except beyond whats in my head, its tough keeping all these ideas floating around in there!
Man, I can feel it in my bones, how dark this is gonna get... yet I can't help but keep reading... I feel that Twiliy is gonna end up going off the deep end near the end just because it would be in her nature to do something all the way, especially how you have her portrayed with the horrible nightmares. Either way, I oddly look forward to the next chapter. I know I like this, yet I know I shouldn't..... I'm going to hell aren't I?
639118 *grins* there's nothing wrong with liking this! and i don't think you are going to hell. You'll just have to wait and see how things play though... i've got a big important final exam today, else i'd have my nose in writing right now... sigh
“But Rarity, I’ll pay you back with my next stipend, I promise!” “You promised that to Applejack, and Pinkie Pie too-"
If you didn't know where THAT was leading, I envy your sheltered life. Man, absentee crackhead mothers of childhood friends i ain't seen in like a decade still be showing up on my dad's doorstep asking for money.
“I was hoping you would be willing to forward me a little supply on credit this month!” Twilight said all at once, “I’ll get you paid back in full next month, I promise!”
AH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
"Number 6: that goddamn credit? Dead it! You think a crackhead paying you back, shit, forget it!" - Biggie, Ten Crack Commandments
Yeah, Hot Shot really is Keith David from Requiem. Groomed her from the start for sexual exploitation. Evil fuck. Bastard didn't even bother starting with a blowjob or getting her wet.
Why didn't Twilight just made her own home-brew meth? ;) Looking forward to Celestias reaction to Twilights addiction.
"However, that said, i refuse to neuter my stories to not contain any sex in it at all, especially when it is such a part of the plot. This was psuedo rape, i am intending real rape, and worse in the coming chapters. Life is not pretty, some times that darkness gets the better of us."
I applaud this attitude. Real life is not pretty, and being afraid to let that show in something like this wouldn't sit right...
Good chapter would be an understatement. I love grimdark.
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I've already gotten requests to not whimp out on this work, and i would like to please what few fans i got.
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Thanks! I always love to hear somepony enjoys my work. I'm not sure i'll have another chapter out tomorrow, but i should by friday.
I also do enjoy the little suggestions people give, I'm not sure i was planning on expanding too far on the reaction of the princesses, but i'll let my mind play with that idea, and see what i come up with.
I think the worst part of my process is that i don't use outlines of anything except beyond whats in my head, its tough keeping all these ideas floating around in there!
Man, I can feel it in my bones, how dark this is gonna get... yet I can't help but keep reading... I feel that Twiliy is gonna end up going off the deep end near the end just because it would be in her nature to do something all the way, especially how you have her portrayed with the horrible nightmares. Either way, I oddly look forward to the next chapter. I know I like this, yet I know I shouldn't..... I'm going to hell aren't I?
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*grins* there's nothing wrong with liking this! and i don't think you are going to hell. You'll just have to wait and see how things play though... i've got a big important final exam today, else i'd have my nose in writing right now... sigh
As a continuation from my comment on chapter 2,
(Moon sugar = DRUGS) I BLOODY KNEW IT!
“But Rarity, I’ll pay you back with my next stipend, I promise!”
“You promised that to Applejack, and Pinkie Pie too-"
If you didn't know where THAT was leading, I envy your sheltered life. Man, absentee crackhead mothers of childhood friends i ain't seen in like a decade still be showing up on my dad's doorstep asking for money.
“I was hoping you would be willing to forward me a little supply on credit this month!” Twilight said all at once, “I’ll get you paid back in full next month, I promise!”
AH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
"Number 6: that goddamn credit? Dead it!
You think a crackhead paying you back, shit, forget it!" - Biggie, Ten Crack Commandments
Yeah, Hot Shot really is Keith David from Requiem. Groomed her from the start for sexual exploitation. Evil fuck. Bastard didn't even bother starting with a blowjob or getting her wet.
Woah man you can't eat your customers.
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"Skooma is extra"
did hot shot fucking destroy her cervix with his last thrust?