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Marshmallow and the cutie mark operatives

What exactly was Rarity doing nightmare night? Do the cutie mark crusaders already have their cutie marks? Magical items and handsome secret agents? And who knew being a fashionista involved fighting ninja's!

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Tast

Tast #1 · May 22nd, 2012 · · ·

Ah, so refreshing! A story description with no grammatical mistakes and/or spelling errors. For this alone I shall read your story.

"THERE IS A SPECIAL RING OF TARTARUS FOR PONIES WHO EMPLOY NINJA'S"

Oh hell, thumbs up just for that. The normal "few grammatical errors", but what I noticed was a lack of indents for new paragraphs. Other than the indents you did wonderfully on this, though I don't see this as a multiparter; more of a one shot.

EDIT: I take it back. This does have multiparter potential if you went the slice of life route. Either way, well done.