This story is a sequel to Diaries of a Traitor part One: The Letter
I suppose this is what I'm meant to do. . . . my father has gathered a group of villians by the name of "The Elements of Disharmony" and plans to overthrow Celestia.
Me and my friends are tasked with finding and capturing them. But first we are sent to the Crystal Empire, to discuss some matters with Princess Cadence.
And we have another mission: Find our missing friend.
This, is the diaries of a so called "traitor". But I intend to prove them wrong. Because I am Swift Justice, son of General Spring Gust. And Celestia's last hope.
EDIT: Rated teen for violence in later chapters.
Chapters (13)
Cool.
Just shoot me a message if you ever need to clarify specifics on the OC's.
~Wishy
6142338 K
Nice. Liking it so far.
6158792 Good to hear. Planning on stuff for chapter 3 then there's going to be walking. Lots of walking.
6158922 PM if you need help! (As always)
If you kill Blade, I'll never forgive you.
Heck, you've never really even shown how badass he is!
6172871 Hey! Only two characters, (okay, technically four) die. Bright Blade doesn't die.
6172879 Second and Blank. I'm calling it.
Oh, and Aurora and Swift (Technically) live.
~Natz
6172882 Uh. . . no. You are so off. . . like, have you even read the last two chapters in book one?
6172929 Nope! (Kek, J/K.)
Was random anyways.
6172932 Well, for obvious reasons, Cardinal is going to be one of the ones that die. Star Swirl is (Technically) alive again, so he is going to die again.
You can figure out the last two.
6172942 Oh- I thought you meant out of our little proagonist group.
Celestia totally dies, Cardinal probably assimilates her or something...
Discord, maybe?
6172946 Uh, besides the mention in the past, no. He isn't really in this book. I suppose it also depends on how I write the ending. . . but for the most part no. Not Discord. But yes, Celestia does. (but that is a spoiler
6173027 WRITE FASTER!
XD
Thanks for that author's note :3
HEEEELL YEAH!
6173154 Yep, Chapter 5 tomorrow.
IF YAKS NOT LIKE!!! YAKS DESTROY!!!!!!!!!!
But it is perfect!! I'm liking the new story already!!
Wow just wow...... Also i like the introduction of a love interest.
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[I go by Slate not Blank!]
Also This story is amazing I am loving what you are doing with it keep it up
Wow this is turning into a real Tragedy
I still am enjoying it immensely!!! Can hardly wait till the next chapter
6173888 Well, hopefully the 5th chapter is gonna be out tonight.
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Awesome!!
6174798 Now that I look at it, it could be out sooner. . .
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cool!! I can hardly wait!!
It is official this is a tragedy. Reason: you killed the main character.
I am excited for more now
6175867 Whoever said he was dead?
6175875
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
You seem to not understand what I meant a Wingblade to be.
See, I was thinking a blade of some sort attached to the wings of a Pegasus, turning the edges of their wings into swords. Not really a ranged throwing weapon.
~Wywint
6176963 Then you have a different vision of a wing blade. Every time I've read or thought of one, I always thought of a ranged throwing weapon.
6176993 *shrugs*
Whatever. Still works.
6177002 Besides that, what did you think of the rest of the chapter?
6177009 Predictable in some ways, but good.
(You flat-out told us Swift was gonna die, kinda took away some of the 'Oomph' of it.)
6177022 True, but I did that to play off of Second's mind for most of this chapter. Suppose I could've kept it a secret.
But, I have two bigger secrets on their way, so., *shrugs*
6177057 Cool.
Really asking Death for a lift? that could be risky.............
6177389 Well. . .not death. . . but, still. . . dead ponies. . .
HOT DAMN!
PUMPING OUT CHAPTERS LIKE SHELLS INTO ATHEON!
6177493 ikr?
So what did you think of this one?
6177506 WOOOOOOO!
6177507 Good to hear.
I like it can hardly wait for the next one!! have you found a good name yet?
6179211 Wish I Was there suggested a few, and I liked Sempra.
And btw I published this not long after you said good night.
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Okay cool lol