New.
I suppose that's the first word that pops into my head when I think of this situation.
Here I am, in the Captain's Cabin of a spaceship. My captain's cabin. . .my spaceship. I was made a commander of a ship full of creatures known as humans, who are followers of some cult called "Cerberus".
A man who says he's like "The Illusive Man, but new" asked me and my friends to help him save the galaxy from this threat. He says they came after the reapers. Without these "Relays" to travel the galaxy, Cerberus is stuck in our solar system, and until the relay is fixed we won't be able to leave.
So, new aliens. New ship. New "Illusive Man". New Mission. New Home.
My name is Twilight Sparkle. Commander Twilight Sparkle of the SR2 Harmony. My mission is to find a way to take my home back.
Or die trying.
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A little forced in the beginning here if you ask me.
Definitely going to track this one, you've piqued my interest. However I agree that the start didn't really seem to flow so well with the rest of the chapter, but I'm certainly looking forward to an update.
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8000748 Yeah, that's sort of a problem I've had in a few other stories of mine. I was trying not to make it forced. Part of me thought I submitted it too quickly.
Twilight in Shepard's role? This is looking good.