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go to sleep little one and once when you wake up and see the horror that lies in the world ill come back to save you and place you back in the wonder of dreams sleep little one, go to sleep for me.
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please leave a comment so i could understand if you like my story or not
please leave a comment im open to read and understand on what you friends want me to improve
This is a very good idea in my opinion but its just the way you introduced it I I think is the problem. Now me I ended up skipping a lot of this chapter to read where bunny and fluttershy come in. The rest I don't really know whats going on. Like where did discord and jack come from ? What is jacks purpose? I don't know. Hope this helps.
6160162 thank for the complement at the beginning bro but i don't know if you're reading right now
but to be honest i did write Jacks purpose. and Discord, we all know him he is the element of chaos it obvious on what hes purpose is going to be and he always pop out randomly 
(oh common bro why would you skip part of the story 
) don't ok don't skip reading that's the reason why you misunderstand their purpose 
but anyways you did help 50% of my count tnx. hope you enjoy bro
message me back 
6162850 I did? Ah my bad should read it over again then. And your welcome.
please comment at part 2
I JUST DONT GET IT!!!!! WHY WONT YOU GUYS LEAVE A MESSAGE FOR ME TO UNDESTAND WHAT YOU WANT ON THE STORY !!!!!! WHY WONT YOU LEAVE A MESSAGE !!!!!! ITS MAKING ME CONFUSE WHAT DO YOU GUYS WANT !!!!!!!! ITS HARD TO UNDERSTAND !!!!!! LEAVE A MESSAGE EVEN A LITTLE IT WILL HELP!!!!!!!! IM TRYING TO MAKE THINGS RIGHT FOR THE STORY BUT I DONT SEE ANYONE WANT TO HELP!!!!! WHY WONT YOU HELP ME IF YOURE GONNA CLICK THAT UNLIKE PLEASE LEAVE ME A COMMENT (IM TRYING NO TO SPEAK A BAD WORD HERE)
LEAVE ME A MESSAGE
6187490 Okay just calm down please
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oh hehehe that one was from 2015 and yeah sorry
When's the next chapter? This is great so far!
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oh thank u so much for liking the story dun worry im preparing the next chapter ... thank u so much
7083925 your welcome!
uhhhh... sorry about the dissmisal of the story but im back and i would continue the story
also gonna give it a lil bit of an edit