When Angel Bunny wishes to understand Fluttershy just a bit more, he wants to protect her, to love her but an accident occurs and that very wish may just come true.
This is a very good idea in my opinion but its just the way you introduced it I I think is the problem. Now me I ended up skipping a lot of this chapter to read where bunny and fluttershy come in. The rest I don't really know whats going on. Like where did discord and jack come from ? What is jacks purpose? I don't know. Hope this helps.
6160162 thank for the complement at the beginning bro but i don't know if you're reading right now but to be honest i did write Jacks purpose. and Discord, we all know him he is the element of chaos it obvious on what hes purpose is going to be and he always pop out randomly (oh common bro why would you skip part of the story ) don't ok don't skip reading that's the reason why you misunderstand their purpose but anyways you did help 50% of my count tnx. hope you enjoy bro message me back
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This is a very good idea in my opinion but its just the way you introduced it I I think is the problem. Now me I ended up skipping a lot of this chapter to read where bunny and fluttershy come in. The rest I don't really know whats going on. Like where did discord and jack come from ? What is jacks purpose? I don't know. Hope this helps.
6160162 thank for the complement at the beginning bro but i don't know if you're reading right now but to be honest i did write Jacks purpose. and Discord, we all know him he is the element of chaos it obvious on what hes purpose is going to be and he always pop out randomly (oh common bro why would you skip part of the story ) don't ok don't skip reading that's the reason why you misunderstand their purpose but anyways you did help 50% of my count tnx. hope you enjoy bro message me back
6162850 I did? Ah my bad should read it over again then. And your welcome.