Max and the Dazzlings are back, and enjoying all their time together. Is their life the embodiment of perfection, or is there a force that is willing to rip them all apart, or die trying?
6407461 Thank you for the comment. Glad you enjoy the story thus far. The thing about the wound was to try and tie the first story to this one. It is mentioned a little more in later chapters, but I was trying not to put too much effort into bringing the first story into this one. It was really just to give his perspective on the situation. With that, show a little bit of progression for his reasoning of why he does a couple of things later on.
I hope I am explaining this well enough to understand. Often it is difficult for me to explain how I think and work things out in my mind.
I really need to get back to continuing the next chapter. Just so much on my mind I find it hard to focus on the story and give it the effort it deserves. -_-
Edit
*Re-reads the chapter* Huh, I was not as subtle as I thought I was. Now that I think about it, maybe referring to it as a "wound" was a bad idea. But was also trying to show progression of time. Ack, trying to think at 6am when I need to be into work in four hrs and not sleeping is not good.
6214871 Somepony cares! Yay!
Update! here.
6407461 Thank you for the comment. Glad you enjoy the story thus far. The thing about the wound was to try and tie the first story to this one. It is mentioned a little more in later chapters, but I was trying not to put too much effort into bringing the first story into this one. It was really just to give his perspective on the situation. With that, show a little bit of progression for his reasoning of why he does a couple of things later on.
I hope I am explaining this well enough to understand. Often it is difficult for me to explain how I think and work things out in my mind.
I really need to get back to continuing the next chapter. Just so much on my mind I find it hard to focus on the story and give it the effort it deserves. -_-
Edit
*Re-reads the chapter* Huh, I was not as subtle as I thought I was. Now that I think about it, maybe referring to it as a "wound" was a bad idea. But was also trying to show progression of time. Ack, trying to think at 6am when I need to be into work in four hrs and not sleeping is not good.