Spike should deck every one of those that deck Chysalis...She's already remorseful about all that shit that happened over twelve years ago, and even knowing where she's really coming from, it seems Flutters, Rare, and Pinkie know that she didn't meant all the bad that she did and deserve a second chance.
Seriously, it's like all the others have ignorantly skipped the fact that SPIKE is her mate, and I'm pretty sure that dragons can go complete apeshit if they believe that their mates and offspring are in danger. I get being mad at how Chrysalis was back then, but they should forgive her--it seems that she forgive them, even though I don't think the mane 6 nor the princesses deserve Chrysalis' forgiveness.
Sorry, it just doesn't feel right to me; I understand that repararation had to be made by the Queen to Equestria, but if still doesn't feel right.
6174494 emotions are sometimes called the enemy if logic. Most of the Mane 6 and some of the support cast feel like at the very least Chrysalis needs some form of physical punishment, and their emotions give them some sort of impression that the actions are justified. At least Cadance's 'retribution' was reasonable.
Seeems Chrysalis has already become too nice. I just found it a little odd that they're all fine with punching her, yet she never points here that she never would've gotten so far if they all didn't abandon Twilight with just a few crocodile tears. Very strange considering she actually did say that right to their faces at the time.
6174554 Right, and the mane six don't deserve anything themselves for leaving Twilight at the altar. Same with Shining for essentially disowning her. Sorry, not criticizing you, just pointing that out.
6175848 You are right, but sometimes memories can have false elements to them (that is to say we put certain things in our memories that never happened, like a parent or sibling throwing fit in the hospital over the harm of a family member when it was really us doing all that)
6184282 I'm sorry about that, but sometime repetition happens in real life. Sometimes a character repeating themself to by saying the same things to different characters can actually feel more natural.
Wow. That took me awhile to read. I'm just wondering if Chrysalis' family will still come after her? I also expect Luna to see Chrysie's dreams soon. I look forward to what she sees.
I can't seriously be the only one who thinks they're actually incredibly lenient with Chrysalis here.
She kidnapped Cadance, put her down in the caves beneath Canterlot where she was all alone in the dark, dirty, afraid; she brainwashed Shining Armor in a manner that was painful at the beginning and turned him into a vegetable later; she turned everypony against Twilight, even her brother and mentor; she brainwashed her three bridesmaids and left them down in the caves with Cadance as her mindslave guards; and she tried to take over Equestria, all the while mocking the ponies right to their faces.
It's a steep climb to get out of that hole.
“We were only going to occupy the city for few weeks, scare up a few ponies, maybe trick a few into giving us sizable donations from their personal accounts, say thanks for being good sports to the princesses and leave.
Yeah, about that—wouldn't it have made more sense not to act like a steretypical cartoon villain if that's not really what you wanted in the first place? I'm not sure I buy what she's saying here. Sounds an awful lot like she's trying to excuse her behaviour from before.
“Yes,” said Chrysalis flatly, “if it had been my mother or any of my siblings instead of me as the cause of your wedding being disrupted chances are Canterlot wouldn't be standing now and the majority of Equestria's pony population would be comatose while what was left of those that fled would be meeting varying results against their opponents. Vespa is particularly ruthless and her wasp aspects mean that her hive can sting anypony into paralysis or death, Culicidae would probably have ended up drinking all the alicorns dry, and I don't mean their special stock,” everypony in the room shivered, “fact of the matter is that I was your best case scenario when it came to a changeling invasion, and due to changeling etiquette, which might as well be a joke most of the time, states that after an attack movement is made no other queen can issue the same attack plan regardless of the original attempt's outcome, it's more of an unwritten law of the changelings, it has more to do with pride than politics, only the queen that made the original attack attempt can repeat, and since failed attempts tend to lead to the extermination of a hive by other hives that can sometimes prove difficult. In short, my failed play on Canterlot actually saved Equestria from further changeling attacks.”
Okay the only reson Chyrsalis had beaten Celestia is because she built up power for months so yeah they would not have enough power to beat Celestia and Luna would fight as well which would cause more problems.
Spike should deck every one of those that deck Chysalis...She's already remorseful about all that shit that happened over twelve years ago, and even knowing where she's really coming from, it seems Flutters, Rare, and Pinkie know that she didn't meant all the bad that she did and deserve a second chance.
Seriously, it's like all the others have ignorantly skipped the fact that SPIKE is her mate, and I'm pretty sure that dragons can go complete apeshit if they believe that their mates and offspring are in danger. I get being mad at how Chrysalis was back then, but they should forgive her--it seems that she forgive them, even though I don't think the mane 6 nor the princesses deserve Chrysalis' forgiveness.
Sorry, it just doesn't feel right to me; I understand that repararation had to be made by the Queen to Equestria, but if still doesn't feel right.
6174494 emotions are sometimes called the enemy if logic. Most of the Mane 6 and some of the support cast feel like at the very least Chrysalis needs some form of physical punishment, and their emotions give them some sort of impression that the actions are justified. At least Cadance's 'retribution' was reasonable.
Seeems Chrysalis has already become too nice. I just found it a little odd that they're all fine with punching her, yet she never points here that she never would've gotten so far if they all didn't abandon Twilight with just a few crocodile tears. Very strange considering she actually did say that right to their faces at the time.
6174554 Right, and the mane six don't deserve anything themselves for leaving Twilight at the altar. Same with Shining for essentially disowning her. Sorry, not criticizing you, just pointing that out.
6175848 You are right, but sometimes memories can have false elements to them (that is to say we put certain things in our memories that never happened, like a parent or sibling throwing fit in the hospital over the harm of a family member when it was really us doing all that)
You seriously need to tone down the expositions. 1/3 of the entire chapter consists on repeating what has been said, multiple times already.
Has there ever been a Changeling King?
Has Spike ever had the chance to search for his phoenix buddy Pee Wee?
6177328 I honestly haven't thought about Peewee until now.
Y U make her reapeate evetyting?
I feel like i am reading a dokumentary and Not a story
6184282 I'm sorry about that, but sometime repetition happens in real life. Sometimes a character repeating themself to by saying the same things to different characters can actually feel more natural.
Wow. That took me awhile to read. I'm just wondering if Chrysalis' family will still come after her? I also expect Luna to see Chrysie's dreams soon. I look forward to what she sees.
I can't seriously be the only one who thinks they're actually incredibly lenient with Chrysalis here.
She kidnapped Cadance, put her down in the caves beneath Canterlot where she was all alone in the dark, dirty, afraid; she brainwashed Shining Armor in a manner that was painful at the beginning and turned him into a vegetable later; she turned everypony against Twilight, even her brother and mentor; she brainwashed her three bridesmaids and left them down in the caves with Cadance as her mindslave guards; and she tried to take over Equestria, all the while mocking the ponies right to their faces.
It's a steep climb to get out of that hole.
Yeah, about that—wouldn't it have made more sense not to act like a steretypical cartoon villain if that's not really what you wanted in the first place? I'm not sure I buy what she's saying here. Sounds an awful lot like she's trying to excuse her behaviour from before.
I hope Spike all deck everyone that decked Chryssie. At least Fluttershy, Rarity and Pinkie thought better than to do it.
Yeah, could use less repetition. I know it happens in real life, but in works of fiction it can be skipped to maintain the pace.
Chryssie's become really nice, I just hope she will deck anyone that tries to abuse it.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Wow, this was a long chapter. I think this was the longest chapter I've ever read on this cite, so congratulations.
“Yes,” said Chrysalis flatly, “if it had been my mother or any of my siblings instead of me as the cause of your wedding being disrupted chances are Canterlot wouldn't be standing now and the majority of Equestria's pony population would be comatose while what was left of those that fled would be meeting varying results against their opponents. Vespa is particularly ruthless and her wasp aspects mean that her hive can sting anypony into paralysis or death, Culicidae would probably have ended up drinking all the alicorns dry, and I don't mean their special stock,” everypony in the room shivered, “fact of the matter is that I was your best case scenario when it came to a changeling invasion, and due to changeling etiquette, which might as well be a joke most of the time, states that after an attack movement is made no other queen can issue the same attack plan regardless of the original attempt's outcome, it's more of an unwritten law of the changelings, it has more to do with pride than politics, only the queen that made the original attack attempt can repeat, and since failed attempts tend to lead to the extermination of a hive by other hives that can sometimes prove difficult. In short, my failed play on Canterlot actually saved Equestria from further changeling attacks.”
Okay the only reson Chyrsalis had beaten Celestia is because she built up power for months so yeah they would not have enough power to beat Celestia and Luna would fight as well which would cause more problems.