Antasma. A being of pure nightmare, left in the dust by Bowser, the Koopa King, and taken down by Mario, Luigi, and Prince Dreambert. God knows how long it has been since that day of defeat and betrayal, but with his revival, he will take revenge. No matter the costs.
This story takes place after the plot line of the game, Mario & Luigi: Dream Team. It is also my second Fanfic I've made on this site, so I definitely ask for Constructive Criticism whilst I make this. Thank you for taking the time to read this, and enjoy the story of our Nightmarish Bat King!
I'm sorry to say that this fic will not be getting any updates in the near future. I simply am unable to find the motivation to work on it. My apologies to those who were following this fanfic.
Well written, even if the nightmare with all those ponies hating Luna is a bit jarring.
I presume this is before the Luna Eclipsed episode, right?
6118986 Well, I guess. I can't quite say I pay attention to the show as much as I pay attention to the community of bronies. I'd be a half-blood when it comes to being a brony: I don't exactly watch the show, but participate in the community of bronies. On the topic of your question, you could say that this could take place before or after it. You know, when you've been the target of hate or fear in the past, you'd still have backlash from it, right?
This story is not already dead in case anyone wanted to know. I am currently working on Chapter 2 of this story, so just be patient for now.
I'm already loving this story but little information. Antasma's accent is slavic, that's what I was told.
Not bad your idea for Antasma's backstory.
6187993 Thanks mate!
6212223 It's nothing.
I know that you're taking a break from this story or from something else but is there going to be more? I'm just curious and I'm back into Dream Team fanmode.
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I'm sorry, my friend, but I simply am unable to find the motivation to try and finish this fanfic. Perhaps one day I may try to finish this, but I wouldn't count on such a thing to occur. Once again, I apologize for this inconvenience...