WARNING: DESCRIPTION AND STORY DOES CONTAIN MARIO AND LUIGI: DREAM TEAM SPOILERS. SKIP TO NEXT PARAGRAPH IN DESCRIPTION TO AVOID SPOILERS
Antasma, the King of Bats, used to be a bat before devouring a pi'llo's nightmare then he became the King of Bats as he was known on Pi'llo Island. Seeking the Dark Stone for his own malevolent purprose, he had acquired it but then was sealed into the realm of dreams before shattering it and petrifying the Pi'llos to stone. Then after being released he went after the Dream Stone with the help of Bowser, the king of koopas. With the Dream Stone in their possession, Antasma wished for the ability to enter the realm of dreams whenever and wherever he wished while Bowser wished for Neo Bowser Castle. Once the Mario Bros. had cornered them, Bowser betrayed Antasma and left him to his fate to meet his end at the hands of the Mario Bros.
Now Antasma awakes within the Everfree Forest with no memory of his past save for his name and very faint memories of the stones. How will Antasma fit into this new world he is now thrusted into? Only time will tell
The amnesia effect is pretty strange (I'm not going to lie), but I can see why you went this route. If this was just standard mental state Antasma, he'd be focusing his antagonistic actions towards Luna.
It's written in a way that would allow me to keep an eye on it though.
4196918 Well in M&L:DT, Antasma did "explode" you could say and I'm interpreting it as that he has reformed his body but not completely. I dunno if I really want to keep the amnesia but given with what I wrote, I'll have to run with it till some time in the future. I'm really glad that you like it and I will try to work on it as much as I can.
4197907 keep memory loss antasma
Can't wait to see where this story goes.
I'm assuming the story's dead. A shame, really...
Are you going to continue this story? And not to insult you or anything but I read that Antasma's accent is slavic, just wanted to tell you that.