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Crepusculo


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The flow of time and history isn't as straight as people think. Every choice ripples out and causes the timeline to branch off into several more lines, each headed for a different future. However they are connected all the same and should one head into completely destruction then the rest will follow.

And that's why an all-seeing deity had chosen ten individuals from other realities and timelines. Together they are the best chance to tip the scales in order to save all of reality. But whether they succeed or not is really up to them.

Note: Inspired by Powerdrainer's "Guilt of a Phantom" and written with permission from said author, a great read and I highly recommend it if your a fan of Danny Phantom.

Starts before the start of GoaP.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 25 )

As the author of the fic which inspired this one, there is only one thing I want to say right now:

Awesome start. Big fan of the Guilt of a Phantom story. So i'm really looking forward to seeing what you planned.

You know. I expected there to be more comments.

Orb guy's name should be Troll King.
Naruto's son's name should be Miso or Scylla.
Sakura's daughter's name should be Momo.:pinkiehappy:

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I would have named Naruto's son Arashi or something like that but what can you do it was Kishimoto's idea. BTW Troll King seems to be more of Kishimoto's thing if the Naruto Gaiden manga is anything to go by.

Wait, but how come Allseer is disgusted by, uh, "things that you fleshlings do" when being disgusted by those things is only a "fleshling" thing? Wouldn't it make more sense for the Allseer to react to those things neutrally like he would react to any other case of pieces of matter interacting with other pieces of matter in the multiverse?

P.S. Not like I'm complaining, but what's with all those sex jokes in the fic? Almost every time this orb appears some kind of inappropriate thing was, is, or will happen prior to its appearance

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Now where is the fun in Allseer being all neutral about things? Just cause he's an all-powerful, all-seeing, but staying behind the scenes entity doesn't mean he can't have a colorful personality. Plus there is a reason for it but I'll reveal it later.

As for the sex jokes, well I may or may not have been influenced by other author's fan works. See if you can guess which ones, there are two of them. Also have you read Negima or Love Hina? Anyway that's how it just came out when I was writing it.

I see the words time and lines and all I can think of is Steins;Gate so to you I say

So... When can we expect a new chapter? :duck:

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Yeah sorry I've been reviewing my ideas and plot for the story and wondering where to I need or should make some changes since the EQG 3: FG came out yesterday and before that the Naruto movie about Boruto.

That and my attention has been divided over other matters, like finding a new job since getting to my current one is a huge pain. And the DBZ watching binge I did earlier this month after I learned I found videos online for Dragon Ball Super.

There are other things but despite that I think I can have the next chapter out within the next week or two...... I hope.

The flashback part reminded me of Men In Black, I love that scene. Good work in this chapter, I'd like to see more of this soon

Still... this updated faster than my fics... :twilightoops::twilightsheepish:

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Me too, I especially loved it when afterwards K asked J if any of it seemed strange to him. There is also another reference to another show, sort of. Here's a hint: Brain Slug.

“You guys are gross, I peeked into your thoughts! Shame on you! SHAME!”

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HA! I loved that scene and episode.

Parker and I need some this part is hilarious

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Currently working on a rewrite and I AM planning on reusing this chapter. If you're wondering why I'm rewriting, well part of it is I want to give this a fresh start since I feel Jack comes off as a Gary Stu Edgelord.along with other reasons.

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