The Legendary Kitsune

When Fluttershy comes across a unknown creature, claiming to be a God, anything can happen... anything. Especially when you brother is the God of Chaos. PS: Image all the ponies as ss2sonic's images on DeviantArt.

Chapters (4)

The Discovery, and Meeting the Elements · 8th Jun 2015 · 1,301 words
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The Great and Powerful Arcane · 10th Jun 2015 · 905 words
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Assassins, and Death · 11th Jun 2015 · 842 words
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Kitsune vs. Hydra · 20th Aug 2015 · 216 words
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flyingtigers40

flyingtigers40 #1 · Jun 10th, 2015 · · · The Great and Powerful Arcane ·

damn she got shocked the fuck up

Texus

Texus #2 · Jun 10th, 2015 · · · The Great and Powerful Arcane ·

"Now watch as the Great and Powerful Trixie makes this pon-" Trixie was cut off.
"Come on I just got here and I'm already bored." Arcane stated.

that´s rude, he didn´t even gave her the chance, and i just like Trixie to much, to not mention this.

"Oh just visiting my sister-in-law nothing more to it." He said.

The story is maybe a bit rushed, but otherwise not bad till now, only that all of the three chapters look like it could have been one chapter.
I just noticed it is a very short story again.

why are there so many people that try to write storys with less than evne 1000 words at the moment?
Sorry that i can´t explain it better, but i know that chapters with less than 1500 words are usually not that nice, probably because of what actually fit in the chapter that way. Or how much is described, what the others think, and stuff like that.

I really like the idea, but the chapters should be really much longer, and everything happened to fast.

Drexlroosh13

Drexlroosh13 #3 · Jul 24th, 2015 · · · Assassins, and Death ·

This is awsome!

The A I

The A I #4 · Jul 25th, 2015 · · · Assassins, and Death ·

More! Please!

mylaptop

mylaptop #5 · Aug 18th, 2015 · · · Assassins, and Death ·

Update?

Articuno

Articuno #6 · Nov 1st, 2015 · · · Kitsune vs. Hydra ·

Why is the grammar so bad, and why does the story progress so fast?
And why the hell is Kitsune an anthropomorphic fox instead of a quadrupedal one.

King Leoric

King Leoric #7 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · · · Kitsune vs. Hydra ·

That cover art is amazing.

yomon7

yomon7 #8 · Apr 28th, 2016 · · · Kitsune vs. Hydra ·

the cover art reminds me of the yugioh card pitch black werewolf

KyuubiMakai009

KyuubiMakai009 #9 · Jun 3rd, 2016 · · · The Discovery, and Meeting the Elements ·

... This... won't end well, will it...?

forrest yuchnitz

forrest yuchnitz #10 · Oct 11th, 2016 · · · The Discovery, and Meeting the Elements ·

why would you use an actual address

Sornos

Sornos #11 · Mar 5th, 2017 · · · Kitsune vs. Hydra ·

I like the concept but it feels to rushed

Spooky Moon

Spooky Moon #12 · Mar 15th, 2017 · 1 · · The Discovery, and Meeting the Elements ·

Jesus, he used a real street address! And why is this "kitsune" an Anthro fox, instead of a normal multi-tailed fox?

Admiral_Gravleos

Admiral_Gravleos #13 · Mar 22nd, 2017 · · · The Discovery, and Meeting the Elements ·

The Address is 24 Minutes away from me...

DracoBrony

DracoBrony #14 · Jun 17th, 2017 · · · The Great and Powerful Arcane ·

Lots of potential here, lots. You have piqued my intrest the ball is in your court my friend good luck

I Question That

I Question That #15 · Jun 18th, 2017 · 1 · · Kitsune vs. Hydra ·

6588815
he's anthropomorphic because the author wrote him that way.
Discord isn't quadrupedal,
So why is it wierd that the BROTHER of discord isn't quadrupedal?
If anything it would be MORE weird if he WAS quadrupedal!

Articuno