Apple Bloom's Shadow

After Bloom & Gloom, Apple Bloom finds that her shadow now talks to her in the waking world, too, and retains the power to make things go away. It only wants to help her.

A student of Twilight Sparkle knows dangerous magic when she sees it. And yet it is hers, unwilling to do anything truly bad without her command.

This secret can not keep forever. Given its host, it will not even keep long. What will those around her think when they learn of her power?

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Lithl

Lithl #1 · Nov 20th, 2015 · 1 · ·

"You came here to ask Twilight's blessing for Fancy Pants' fast recovery?"

Filthy Rich

Winged Cat

Winged Cat #2 · Nov 21st, 2015 · · ·

6651697 ...I should get more prereaders. Fixed. Thank you.

RainythePegasus_Archive

RainythePegasus_Archive #3 · Dec 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I liked how you wrote this idea. It's intersting and makes sense. I wish it could be a little bit longer, I really liked this concept.

Winged Cat

Winged Cat #4 · Dec 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

6772109 Thanks, but you nailed the problem: it's a concept. I keep coming up with ideas, but turning them into stories...you don't want to know the number of unpublished, half-written stories I currently have, and that's just the ones that made it that far.