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The main character is pretty likeable so far, I think you pulled of the character talking about the events of Xenoverse in retrospect pretty well. It seems the basis of the plot will be similar to Xenoverse (with the whole fixing time stuff at various points). Overall, a solid start.
6054592 To be honest, I hadn't expected people to start liking it this fast, :)
Where's Demon God Dumplin?
6066257 Dumplin might make an appearance... I have to go back through some of his vids, lol
Who is Demigra and where is he from?
6105102 Since I was creating this story with the premise that readers have played, or at least know of, Xenoverse, I think it can do with a bit of explaining here since Demigra is only relevant in-story by name and nothing else really.
Demigra is the final boss of Dragonball: Xenoverse, assuming your character had to reach about level 50-70 by the time they beat a tag team of Beerus and Whis a few missions previously, Demigra is practically a walk in the park, being about 15-12 levels below them both times you fight him solo
vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/9/92/Demigra_full.png/revision/latest?cb=20150301104953 <-- about level 70
vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/4/49/Demigra_Final.png/revision/latest?cb=20150228041712 <-- about level 73
Xenoverse sounds really good and fun! But I wish I could make the male Majin look like Super/Kid Buu or that you could make the Saiyan characters go SSJ4.
Anyway else worried what would happen if Beers met the CMC? Or Pinkie Pie?
6106467 I wish the same thing about male majin characters, people tend to only make that kind as a joke.
And I can say exactly what would happen... destruction of Equestria... or at least in my story, a battle between the goddesses of Equestria and Beerus
Looks like our Paolina may be getting a student or two of her own soon.
I liked how Paolina interacted with Scratch Ream, Twilight and Spike in this chapter. It felt pretty natural. Cello already seems to be an interesting character. Loving the inclusion of lore interspersed here and there. Can't wait for more.
6167865 That's what I'm going for, something natural that doesn't focus quite as much on the mane 6 after the first few episodes and instead develops some of the background characters
After reading the first six chapters of this, this story got on to my Favorites List. Keep up with the good work!
6192274 I certainly will, there's no shortage of written desire as it is
Considering Nightmare Moon in the corrupted timeline got the, I guess you could say, "Power Buff", I guess it's safe to assume that the major enemies the Mane 6 face later on (Discord, Queen Chrysalis and the Changelings, King Sombra, etc.) will get the buff Towa will eventually cast on them (don't know where she went after the ending of Xenoverse).
6197829 I sorta do since they become a PQ in the expansion DLCs, but the battle with them is mad tough, you have to beat both of them in 5 minutes, and that's it... I don't have the DLC but I really want to get it. I'm not sure if the DLC that has them as a PQ also has a storyline ending for them or what, but I do know there's a PQ where you fight them... and it's insanely hard
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I can't wait to see Discord with the "Power Buff". My expectations are going to be high when that comes around.
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6200327 I wouldn't recommend setting those expectations too high there high-standards-dad, I'm certainly nowhere near the best writer on this site and I can only say that I will try my best on the fight. but my best may not be enough.
Aw, I thought this was going to lead to a loopy Applejack beat down.
6219022 Why would she beat on poor, exhausted AJ? she might break something since this whole world seems to be made of something weak like paper mache...
6219713 Or Raditz...
6220690 You, sir or madam, win a mustache and a trollestia.
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Four seasons early too! The mystery begins of the search for the true culprit. I am liking the interaction between Spike and Paolina. Loved the daydream crashing. Also nice that you kept the others in character still despite the changes.
Can't wait for Boast Busters.
Who will get the dark boost? Trixie, or the Ursa? My money's on both!
6249053 Thank you much, I'm quite enjoying writing the story, although I've recently re-discovered my passion for Assassin's creed IV and Linkara's History of Power Rangers
6249282 Hilariously enough... I'm currently working on that chapter
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I hope it is action packed, thrilling, and lemon scented.
6280007 No! How did you know?
WHAAAAAAAAAT hercule isn't the champion anymore? WHATS WRONG WITH THIS CRAZY STORY.
Ahem
Now with that out of the way, great character building with Trixie and the two other Saiyans you introduced can't wait to read more on them
Now I don't want Trixie to get the evil power up. I'm hoping the Ursa gets it though, and maybe a change so the Major comes instead/with the Minor. A three way saiyan beat down would also be much appreciated.
6289765 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! I'm fairly certain you'll enjoy the next couple coming out then... I hope...
6289895 As for you good sir, I've already got the chapter regarding the antagonizing of the ursa finished, and I certainly do hope that you'll be enjoying that chapter as well
Oh God, Gomo is using that voice option.
6290823 Yep, all of my characters in the story are ones that I hand-crafted and trained in the game, and for Gomo I couldn't help but use the confirmed Abridged Nappa voice
I still need to get a full list on the moves who's names they parodied
Hm now Paulina actually has to train some more, you think she might have tried to possibly learn SSGSS form from goku or vegeta, since she has to fight these kinds of guys a lot, or even whis or beerus
6310127 One would think, but sadly there didn't seem to be enough saiyans around at one time for her to obtain the Saiyan God form.
6311093 true but even vegeta has this new form, which apparently doesn't need the multiple Saiyans to do it, so maybe she can learn sooner or later
6311491 I haven't seen the ressurection of F movie yet so I can't say for certain how the ascension to godhood would be achieved for Paolina
6311491 It's also not hard to believe that after the events of Battle of Gods Vegeta used the same process as Goku did only with the variation of having goku instead of vegeta giving the prince of saiyans the power
6311672 yeah, but you should really see it it's really good, in both languages
6311754 I want to... I just haven't had the chance to
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it's alright just watech it soon
6311904 I've actually been having my interest for star wars developing lately and am working on a story with that theme, although I'm not going to start submitting it until it's complete, since I've already got a bunch of stories that I'm already working on
Truly sad to see such an interesting story receive so little attention, I wish we would all be a little more giving with our attention. If the story is interesting to you, it should be liked. At least, in my opinion.
6342398 I'm not as concerned about the likes or dislikes on a story, more that my amazing readers enjoy the journey
KO loving this story so what will happen next?
Wait a minute. A readut in RADITZ'S? DBZ Abriged reference? love it. :)
oh she says that too
I'm just gonna stop commenting on how there abridged references everywhere seeing them in three chapters straight.
Well things got a little intimate there, but they seemed to enjoy it though