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JeweledMoon


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There is a certain darkness in the Princess of Friendship's mind. A darkness that wants her to control and recreate the minds of others. And once she picks up a book on hypnosis and mind control, the darkness can break free. Free to control.
Free to control all.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

It seems as though a few of Fluttershy's triggers do essentially the same thing... that and a couple spelling mistakes aside, not bad. Will be following this one for later updates.

Seems extremely similar to Celestia's Power and Control.

This needs a dark tag.

Keep this fic going. It looks great so far. :yay:

She might as well have been the Princess if Reading.

...the Princess of Reading.

while stIll keeping a soft tone.

"still", with a small "i".

COOL! Can't wait!

*post a story that has potential
*Two chapters in two days
*Disappear from Fimfic five days later

That is not how hypnosis works.

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Actually Hypnosis can work This way only it is very hard To do

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