ah here we are. not quite a tragedy but we'll delve a bit more into that later. we find out Dawn has a soft, or hard, spot when it comes to good ponies and family. this will lead to a major development so read on.
way to go on a great chapter, is there any chance you are still accepting ocs characters? if so i have one hell of a doosey for you.
-OC RACE: Changling Princess -Gender: Female -Parents: Queen chrysalis -Name: Mirage Crystal / Crystal Mirage (either name depending on you, if you want to change the name go ahead) -prefered Appereance in pony form: cutie mark is a mirror with her mane being pure red in a style similar to dashes, body coat is emerald in color, with her hooves to her knees being the same blood red as her changling form. -Specialization: Infiltration/ up close combat, is capable of doing long range when throwing her weapons.(infilitration due to her being a changling and can take any form) -Weapon of Choice: Windmill shuriken for mid-long range, and a serrated ninja esque battle fighting fan for short range, hand to hand combat. (the shuriken is a creation of magic, and made out of dark metal, witch is highly hard to break, Where as the Metal fan is Black crystal, like twilights magic armour) http://s291.photobucket.com/albums/ll290/JiMmIyZ/Weapons/?action=view¤t=WindmillShuriken.jpg&sort=ascending http://www.vikingsword.com/vb/showthread.php?p=99016 -Battle Style: graceful like fluttersh, with a dash of speed like rainbowdash. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dzQaXWjZ2iw&feature=related
-Appereance: Half the Size of her mother Chrystaliss, Pure White Mane, with her entire body the same color as her mothers, exept for her hooves witch are blood red up to her knees. -Personality in combat: Level headed, likes risks only when there appropriate, she usually has a calm and collected mind, shes no tactitian but she has impressive agility due to her fan training techniquess and she knows this, and most of the time doesnt mind showing off these skills. when she uses her shuriken she is very accurate and calms her mind so she can be very very deadly accurate for her ranged attacks. -Personality out of combat: She is very freindly, likes making new freinds whenever possible, shes very quick to defend and stick up for her freinds when there in trouble, or being harrassed. she is very loyal to a fault. she is very calm and coolected most of the time, unless shes pushed to her limit, in witch she completely goes nutso(think futtershy at the gala), at witch it only takes a a simple hypnotic suggestion of a certain word to calm her bck down due to a hypnotist incident years befoer. -Backstory: (if you want to make an appropriate backstory for her go ahead, sicne i really dont think its nessasary since shes the flippen daughter of queen chrysaliss)
anyway if you want to use this character go ahead, if not oh well, but in all honesty i really would like to see a character like this, it would be interesting to see an espioanage type character that can change her form at will, for infiltration, as for the weapons she uses there not that commen in stories, its usually swords, spears , or other wepons of the like. ive have never see a shuriken or fan user in any story ive read so far, it would be interesting to see. maybe she could meet team 1 in a mission, when dawn gets into more than she can chew, another way is to have her already on a mission and have dawn almost hurt her by having her and dawn go toe to toe as it were till she reveals her identity, or you can introduce her any way you want, im just giving you some hints as to what could be a good way to introduce her, if you were use her in the story.
as i said this is all an idea you could use or not use for yuor story , but to reiterate it would be interesting to see, anyway have a awsome day and keep up the awsome chapters. please pm me if you are i would love to hear if your going to use her or not.
i was just wondering if you could include my oc in the story , as like a side character, or best freind of the dawn. or you could use the idea that they meet during one of her missions and have her fight dawn till she reveals her identity , that would be cool to see.and as for shipping wise i would say if you want to ship her any way you want go ahead.
opps i totally forgot giving you some story ideas for the next chapter: maybe dawn and team have to infiltrate a enemy meeting/stronghold or hideout and see what actually is happening and what the great schemer is going to be planning to do this time around, and while there something goes wrong or there found out somehow, and they have to fight there way out, all of them get out of there exept dawn where she tried to buy time for her team to escape, and in the midst of things just before things get too out of hand and out of control for her to handle a ghoul/cultist joins the fight and starts attacking the enemy ghouls/cultists and helping dawn survive the fight , so while this is going on dawn is flabergasted that this cultist is helping her so she kicks the idea from her mind and starts decapitating and killing the enemy till all but the one that is helping her is left , unfort dawn is too caught up in the battle to notice that all the non enemy cultists are ded, and she starts attacking the freindly one, they go at it , till the cultists reveals her identity by unshapshifting and telling dawn her name and her abilities and other important things that would make dawn snap out of it and stop attacking her, all the while still defending against dawns blows , and almost disarming her, with her weapons( aka the serrated blade fans)......this is as far as i can think of for plot wise, as for the freindly changling maybe have her be apart of team 2 or something after the fight she pledges and joins the dawn guard. cause after all her being a changling she can pretty much do anything and infiltrate anywhere. anywho thats just an idea for a future or the next chapter, you can take it or throw it away if you dont like it, or if you want you can alter it.
711341 well defending against dawn's blows would be the only thing she could do, Dawn almost rivals her mothers in combat ability. pm me the bio for this changeling and it may just well happen
711361 ive already put the bio on this chapters page, remmeber my oc was mirage crystal or crystal mirage. and as for almsot disarming the weapon fan users can do that.
ah here we are. not quite a tragedy but we'll delve a bit more into that later. we find out Dawn has a soft, or hard, spot when it comes to good ponies and family. this will lead to a major development so read on.
nice liked that last line The only award I want is an 'I killed the fucking bastards' award keep it up dark
Baaaahahaha. The last line. Dawn is a pony after my own heart :
Niiiiiceeee always a good work
way to go on a great chapter, is there any chance you are still accepting ocs characters? if so i have one hell of a doosey for you.
-OC RACE: Changling Princess
-Gender: Female
-Parents: Queen chrysalis
-Name: Mirage Crystal / Crystal Mirage (either name depending on you, if you want to change the name go ahead)
-prefered Appereance in pony form: cutie mark is a mirror with her mane being pure red in a style similar to dashes, body coat is emerald in color, with her hooves to her knees being the same blood red as her changling form.
-Specialization: Infiltration/ up close combat, is capable of doing long range when throwing her weapons.(infilitration due to her being a changling and can take any form)
-Weapon of Choice: Windmill shuriken for mid-long range, and a serrated ninja esque battle fighting fan for short range, hand to hand combat. (the shuriken is a creation of magic, and made out of dark metal, witch is highly hard to break, Where as the Metal fan is Black crystal, like twilights magic armour)
http://s291.photobucket.com/albums/ll290/JiMmIyZ/Weapons/?action=view¤t=WindmillShuriken.jpg&sort=ascending
http://www.vikingsword.com/vb/showthread.php?p=99016
-Battle Style: graceful like fluttersh, with a dash of speed like rainbowdash.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dzQaXWjZ2iw&feature=related
-Appereance: Half the Size of her mother Chrystaliss, Pure White Mane, with her entire body the same color as her mothers, exept for her hooves witch are blood red up to her knees.
-Personality in combat: Level headed, likes risks only when there appropriate, she usually has a calm and collected mind, shes no tactitian but she has impressive agility due to her fan training techniquess and she knows this, and most of the time doesnt mind showing off these skills. when she uses her shuriken she is very accurate and calms her mind so she can be very very deadly accurate for her ranged attacks.
-Personality out of combat: She is very freindly, likes making new freinds whenever possible, shes very quick to defend and stick up for her freinds when there in trouble, or being harrassed. she is very loyal to a fault. she is very calm and coolected most of the time, unless shes pushed to her limit, in witch she completely goes nutso(think futtershy at the gala), at witch it only takes a a simple hypnotic suggestion of a certain word to calm her bck down due to a hypnotist incident years befoer.
-Backstory: (if you want to make an appropriate backstory for her go ahead, sicne i really dont think its nessasary since shes the flippen daughter of queen chrysaliss)
anyway if you want to use this character go ahead, if not oh well, but in all honesty i really would like to see a character like this, it would be interesting to see an espioanage type character that can change her form at will, for infiltration, as for the weapons she uses there not that commen in stories, its usually swords, spears , or other wepons of the like. ive have never see a shuriken or fan user in any story ive read so far, it would be interesting to see. maybe she could meet team 1 in a mission, when dawn gets into more than she can chew, another way is to have her already on a mission and have dawn almost hurt her by having her and dawn go toe to toe as it were till she reveals her identity, or you can introduce her any way you want, im just giving you some hints as to what could be a good way to introduce her, if you were use her in the story.
as i said this is all an idea you could use or not use for yuor story , but to reiterate it would be interesting to see, anyway have a awsome day and keep up the awsome chapters. please pm me if you are i would love to hear if your going to use her or not.
652676 hm, may use this later
653945 cool i look forward to seeing how you use the character
667081 a little bit. I needed a badass instructor and I started with Naruto fics and i freaking love Anko. it wasn't intentional, but unconscious
Dark0592 you are awesome
677366 thank you sir
are the others of m6 still vamponies?
703704 yes they are
i was just wondering if you could include my oc in the story , as like a side character, or best freind of the dawn. or you could use the idea that they meet during one of her missions and have her fight dawn till she reveals her identity , that would be cool to see.and as for shipping wise i would say if you want to ship her any way you want go ahead.
711286 pm the situation and I'll look it over
opps i totally forgot giving you some story ideas for the next chapter: maybe dawn and team have to infiltrate a enemy meeting/stronghold or hideout and see what actually is happening and what the great schemer is going to be planning to do this time around, and while there something goes wrong or there found out somehow, and they have to fight there way out, all of them get out of there exept dawn where she tried to buy time for her team to escape, and in the midst of things just before things get too out of hand and out of control for her to handle a ghoul/cultist joins the fight and starts attacking the enemy ghouls/cultists and helping dawn survive the fight , so while this is going on dawn is flabergasted that this cultist is helping her so she kicks the idea from her mind and starts decapitating and killing the enemy till all but the one that is helping her is left , unfort dawn is too caught up in the battle to notice that all the non enemy cultists are ded, and she starts attacking the freindly one, they go at it , till the cultists reveals her identity by unshapshifting and telling dawn her name and her abilities and other important things that would make dawn snap out of it and stop attacking her, all the while still defending against dawns blows , and almost disarming her, with her weapons( aka the serrated blade fans)......this is as far as i can think of for plot wise, as for the freindly changling maybe have her be apart of team 2 or something after the fight she pledges and joins the dawn guard. cause after all her being a changling she can pretty much do anything and infiltrate anywhere.
anywho thats just an idea for a future or the next chapter, you can take it or throw it away if you dont like it, or if you want you can alter it.
711341 well defending against dawn's blows would be the only thing she could do, Dawn almost rivals her mothers in combat ability. pm me the bio for this changeling and it may just well happen
711361
ive already put the bio on this chapters page, remmeber my oc was mirage crystal or crystal mirage. and as for almsot disarming the weapon fan users can do that.
711718 can you put it in a PM please so I don't have to hunt for it every time?
711748 ok
its sent
m'kay kill a fucking bastard and I will make sure you get that award