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KismetStarr


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The time has come to take a bow
like all your other selves.
Eleven's hour is over now,
The clock is striking twelve's...

Princess Twilight has lived a very long life, filled with ups and downs. As time has moved along she has said goodbye to all those she loved as they moved on to the next world. With each goodbye she was made to promise them all one thing or another. Now as the end comes near she looks back on her final moments with her friends and the promises she's made.

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Rairity said softly as she trotted over.



It's Rarity buddy.

Grammar is your friend, Don't abuse it.

Hey man, grammar and stuff aside, this be a good premise.

Reminiscing the past gives a good idea to what Twilight will go through in the future.

Other than that, prior stuff I said brings it down man.

Trust me I know about the grammar issues. I wrote this one one my tablet and it kind of stalls out mid writing. I'll fix them all right away. Thanks for reading. I didn't catch the Rarity mixup so thank you very much.

veeeeeery good
really liked it
please continue

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