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Extra Space in between were and Born oddly enough...
6346477 Fixes applied!
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Fair enough. Although, indeed, it is quite the glorified hill.
So, I have this theory: what if energies are soul to be. One fleshy being is born, an energy "die" to become his soul.
6346599 The disturbing part is that it makes some sense...
Wonder if a merger is unavoidable...
You need an end quote to: "No! No no no!"
6347007 No! No no no no no! Er, I mean yes! Yes yes yes yes!
how come I am scared for Cindy and William?
this is a good chapter. super good work DS.
Harts Fire
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Oh, nothing big, just the fact that you made it so that teleportation is completely safe. If anything, Equestrian teleportation should have failsafes to avoid it, instead of it inherently "shunting" the caster to the side. Not trying to force this on you, but my headcanon for it is that the spell 'scans' the area for obstructions, if it finds an obstruction, it looks for the nearest place without an obstruction, if it doesn't find an obstruction, it teleports.
Not to mention the reactions from the overlap of mass "OH GOD SHE FUSED WITH A WALL!"
6347937 You just said it'd do the same thing, which confuses me. She appeared at the closest available point, but it wasn't where she intended, which left her a bit dizzy but unharmed. Appearing -in- someone would require her to expend enough force to explode them, on purpose, and that'd be a lot of energy, or they'd suddenly be way too close atomically, which could result in explosive fun for both parties.
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Nope. It says that she teleported into a spot that was occupied and was "shunted" to the side. Suggesting she DID teleport, but was pushed aside by the mass that was already there.
6348697 She showed up. There was a bright light. It shuffled to the side, then there was a Crystal.
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So it's just a misinterpretation then.
As a side note
Everytime I see this my mind says "city"
I'm really liking this new break from the adventure of travel. It's good to get a chance for all the characters to relax and really learn about each other through some slice of life interactions.
And, so, let me make sure I'm understanding this chapter correctly. According to Karen, Cindy is subconsciously growing closer to William, in such a way that eventually they'll merge minds and become a single person? Makes sense, given that they share a mental link. If you constantly hear someone else's thoughts and share memories/emotions with them, over time all of that sharing will make both minds basically identicle. Your thoughts will sync up and there won't be any different anymore.
And then, apparently they think that an energy being's ascension creates souls which inhabit creatures on Earth? What happens if there are more people being born than energy beings ascending, I wonder? Perhaps a new birth automatically pulls energy from the void? Hmmm.
Hehehe, so many glorious puns.
I still want them to stay as they are.
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I caught literally none of them!
this kind of reminds me of the Symbiote, Troy, from Men In Black: The Animated Series.
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the thing abput Troy is that whoever he bonds with has a 24 hour time limit to pass him on, or else