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There are two spaces between "natural" and "and", and I think the last word is supposed to be "then".
I'm calling it right now, Karen will want to be in William's child.
Holy shit crackers! He didn't make a typo joke!
Also, YES I WAS RIGHT, TELEPATHY RULES!
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Stop reading my mind! That's Will and Cindy's schtick!
6357496 Sure I did.
6357500 did you just edit that in?
6357507 Nope. I even went to check when you said that.
6357554 hmmm, wonder how i missed that...
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It was the typos¡
They're making you go insane!
6358595 their a little late to the party, my own imagination beat them there. Years ago on that note.
perfection.
I don't need to say more.
Harts Fire
Very cool chapter. I love Cindy's character, and it's great to see from her perspective.
Very heartwarming that everyone is pitching in their energy, and Cindy can feel them contributing.
Also, tiny little foal Centaur! Adorable mental image.
Learning sapience. Very cool indeed. I love fiction written from a nonhuman viewpoint, though Cindy's isn't quite as nonhuman as it once was.
Cindy's developing mentality left some typos:
"The," "those," or deleting the word would all be acceptable fixes.
Capitalize it, since it's being used as a name.
6360439 We'll forgive her, she's still new to humanity. At least she's eager to learn more!
It's amazing what one little choice can do, isn't it?
I wish cindy never left will.....
If you think about it, it makes sense, from an evolutionary standpoint. If there were two variants of a gene, one that caused sucking one's children to feel pleasant and the other, not so, i GUARANTEE that, say, ten years later there would be WAY more of the first variant. Likewise with having sex.
ch101
double spaces