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I like big plots and I cannot lie, the other brothers may deny.
will at least Neon tried to do the right thing and if the human Roland didn't want to go with Neon then so be it he maybe a slave but i'd just let him try escapee his own way if thats what he wants but it probably be useless thought with there being so many ponies
6267843 didn't the girl Lizzie say that is her old killed master name the one slave Sandra taken in ???
6267920 Ah, her. No one involved in that trial was innocent. The human, guilty, the mob, guilty, the mayor, guilty, his old owner? guilty. They were all awful in their own way.
6267960 yeah it like that in the world before but atleast it was better before the pony apocalypse world now it worse because 1 different species that used to human 2. most of human turned ponies lost there mind and little more then smart animals now at best. but no more of that I think the herd should adopt Lizzie like a daughter ( but they have be careful that they don't make her into a pony) or ask what happen to her parents so they can be saved and reunited or just let Lizzie choose to be with a human family if she wants that.
At this rate, Neon is going to be more of a "good guy" than Dust. She is making progress. Dust, however, will have to learn to control herself. It's not the first time she jumps on Neon because she feels like it (even if she never win the following wrestling). Actually, it seems like Neon is starting to be obnoxious mainly toward Dust, but on the other hand, Dust makes no effort at all to help the situation, and keep acting aggressively. I think it won't get better unless one of the alpha do something about it. Or unless they live the kind of little adventure where they are both alone but must work together and, once it's finished, end up with some kind of weird friendship going, but I can't see how that kind of thing could happen right now. The alpha thing is probably going to happen first.
And yes, you can blame typos
6268526 Typo destroyed!
a interesting chapter i like it.
6267904 Cute Avatar, and ya and I agree with you. I think I see Neon as more of the Anti-Hero archtype like Shadow the hedgehog or Alucard
6268526 You don't think her actions, the clearly unwanted sexual attacks (technically rape), still mark her as quite a bit damaged?
He noticed our coming and scowled with obvious doubt.
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"draining" is not a sexual act, and that's all she had done here.
Even then, she had to drain someone to heal the wounded, and she actually took the time to warn the nurse, something that I don't think she would have bothered with a few weeks earlier.
When it was with Dust, well, draining is the best way to take her out, that's as simple as that. She didn't try to do anything else to her, and that's already better than last time.
And if you're talking about Hope, he was just hugged, and didn't even say "no". And when he told her to give Dust's energy back, she did.
Yeah, no, I still think Neon is far less "damaged" than she used to be.
6270655 Fixed!
6270686 "Every contact was a delightful surge of pleasure" (from a few chapters back)
Draining someone is the equivalent of sexual assault. It has been shown, many times, that draining or feeding energy gives pleasure.
If that pleasure is unwanted then that is sexual assault.
We would really need more from Dust's point of view, or even some sign that the reason she provokes these scuffles is because she likes it.
No. "Pleasure" doesn't mean "sex". The same way "sex" doesn't mean "pleasure".
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6270920 I'm a bit confused why people get hung up on little things while big things are right there. Neon has raped Dust Kicker before, quite explicitly, just not this time. She's quite 'skilled' with the use of her tongues.
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That was my point. She did it before, but not this time, so at least, she's learning.
ch80
Roland was a bit of a twat, if he had stayed with Neon, he would be out of town and maybe back with people that cared for one and all in civility. But no *sigh* he has to be a sheep and run off with the flock!