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End of the dream

Short story about the Doctor and his encounter with Ditzy, his adventures, and that they suffered to reach the happiness.

Based on the series of Tumbrl, Discorded Whooves

Thanks to my friends for supporting me to begin writing in english.

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Novalis14

Novalis14 #1 · Dec 10th, 2018 · · ·

While it is obvious that english is your second language the story is very good. You occasionally use the wrong word or put the words in the wrong order making the turn of phrase clunky. However, despite that I understood what you were saying and the quality shines through. I can tell that you are a great writer and with a little more practice with English you'll be even better.