Okay, so I decided against taking Ven's advice and making this one big 7000 or so word chapter. Reason being that I know my schedule this month is fucking insane, and I don't want to delay an update another whole month. Plus, there is a lot of sexual content in the whole Telling Twilight Arc. Part 1 has plenty to validate breaking them up. Hopefully, splitting the chapter up doesn't prove to be a mistake.
Ven does a great job, but I ignore his advice sometimes. Assume if something seems off that it was my fuck up and not his, cause I choose to be stubborn.
That all being said, this was fun to write. Because of the nature of this story, I can do a lot of thing's I'm a little less willing to do in my other clops. Kinky, kinky things.
The master thing not my style, but the in public while someone is right there in the next room that is alot more my style and the whole talking to twilight while you play with them yeah spike you remind me of me. the hard part is keeping a straight face. and now i wait for a update from the heavens. you see what i did there?
809424 Well originally it was a one shot, but it got such a great number of favers and reviews that I realized it could be a fun way to do BDSM stuff without a huge lead up story behind it. Not that I dislike the lead up mind you but it's not always necessary.
810446 It should be on all the blogs with his pictures. It's his name in blue just clicky clicky and it should take you to it. Your probably gonna have to wait a week or two though since he still has 6 more requests to finish.
816590 I only shoot the one way to be fair. Can't really write a role I've never played and have no interest in playing. Fun fact most guys are sub personality types in the bedroom. Always was a statistical anomaly
I listened to JamesIsTheBrony read this on YouTube.
Fics like this are why I can't take erotica seriously at all. The dialogue is pat, the plot contrived, the situation totally unbelievable. They're both so out of character that you could slot in any two ponies, or any two characters at all, and have it be the exact same story. Thanks for a good laugh.
1241532 I'm crying. Oh wait, no, no I'm not. The fact you felt the need to garner some kind of attention from being an ass tells me mommy and daddy didn't love you enough. So thanks for the laugh.
1243952 First clop story I ever wrote, so I was more focused on writing the clop and getting use to the concept than the story at the time. If you want newer, more accurate, and story oriented material go read one of my other two clop stories that have actual plots.
1247435 It takes some getting used to, that's for sure. It also doesn't help that you listened to James who was to busy flirting with the female reader to stop laughing. Connotation.
Okay, so I decided against taking Ven's advice and making this one big 7000 or so word chapter. Reason being that I know my schedule this month is fucking insane, and I don't want to delay an update another whole month. Plus, there is a lot of sexual content in the whole Telling Twilight Arc. Part 1 has plenty to validate breaking them up. Hopefully, splitting the chapter up doesn't prove to be a mistake.
Ven does a great job, but I ignore his advice sometimes. Assume if something seems off that it was my fuck up and not his, cause I choose to be stubborn.
That all being said, this was fun to write. Because of the nature of this story, I can do a lot of thing's I'm a little less willing to do in my other clops. Kinky, kinky things.
We need more devilish scenarios.
808876 Oh trust me this is the soft part of the Arc. I already have the first 1000 word of Part 2 done and it makes this look innocent.
im gonna use this on my girldfriend and my sister
I didn't know this would be continuing. I really look forward to more of this.
The master thing not my style, but the in public while someone is right there in the next room that is alot more my style and the whole talking to twilight while you play with them yeah spike you remind me of me. the hard part is keeping a straight face. and now i wait for a update from the heavens. you see what i did there?
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because i really do like where this story is going!
809424 Well originally it was a one shot, but it got such a great number of favers and reviews that I realized it could be a fun way to do BDSM stuff without a huge lead up story behind it. Not that I dislike the lead up mind you but it's not always necessary.
809426 Here have some plot dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png
809456 YES! but you sure one will do oh well ill aks vinyl
809526 It is odd that Octavia's is the only custom emoticon plot. Oh well e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/love/lust.gif
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809572 Okay but you'll have to wait. Also I love your avatar, Disclestia is my second favorite ship.
... I think i came...
809641... It's probably not a good thing if you're unsure. I suggest seeing a doctor about that.
809456 Well it's good to see more of it.
hawt, hawt, hawt supra hwat,
i fear my pants may have just caught on fire! worth it
810351... Sorry was distracted by your avatar again. There so much cutter as chicks!
You should invest in some fire-proof pants. Spontaneously combusting pants sound very dangerous. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_dayum.png
810412
yes they are cute as chicks. you simply must send me a link to this guys page so i can ask him for a sexy shim sham sister pic!
810446 It should be on all the blogs with his pictures. It's his name in blue just clicky clicky and it should take you to it. Your probably gonna have to wait a week or two though since he still has 6 more requests to finish.
810473
thxs. and i am a very patient pony
BUT I WANT IT NOW
810585 *blames Ven*dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Redheart_shh.png
808503
It's all good, all of what I give you is advice, not orders. I'm definitely not some kind of English professor. I make a lot of mistakes too.
810606 Oh, good. I thought this was about the other thing I literally just posted... I mean... fuck.
810627
Oh don't worry, you're gonna get something for that. Don't.... worry....
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810861 Psh.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png I AM CHAOS!
Like i always say under your stories:thechive.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/girls-with-cleavage-28.jpg
810875
I don't think you understand...
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811316 Reminds me of an ex. Bitches be crazy.
811322
Really? You just don't get it, do you?
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811456 Someone needs a hug.
It'd be funny if Rarity turned the tables on him and made him her own little sex-slave for a while. Who says you can't take turns being the master?
nice real nice.
816590 I only shoot the one way to be fair. Can't really write a role I've never played and have no interest in playing. Fun fact most guys are sub personality types in the bedroom. Always was a statistical anomaly
I wish to see more, and what do you mean breakup? I don't wan them to break up. Breakups make Rarislut sad
875609 Breaking the chapter up into parts, not breaking up Spike and Rarity... that'd be kinda counter productive. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rarity_lolface.png
Oh that was quite nasty... *sigh* but it'll have to do...unzt unzt unzt! AHHHH
This was nice. :)
939843 dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rarity_lolface.png ... no.
Other than a few grammatical errors, I love it.
940141 Damn, thought me and Ven caught all of those. Well I'm happy you're enjoying it
940159
Yes. Keep up the good work!
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
That is, if you want to.
love it
1160461 That's because you have good taste
1161976 thank you i have good taste and you have good talent
I listened to JamesIsTheBrony read this on YouTube.
Fics like this are why I can't take erotica seriously at all. The dialogue is pat, the plot contrived, the situation totally unbelievable. They're both so out of character that you could slot in any two ponies, or any two characters at all, and have it be the exact same story. Thanks for a good laugh.
1241532 I'm crying. Oh wait, no, no I'm not. The fact you felt the need to garner some kind of attention from being an ass tells me mommy and daddy didn't love you enough. So thanks for the laugh.
1243231
Yeah, that was kind of a jerky comment, in some ways.
Let me ask you something, though: were you earnest about this being a truly romantic encounter between Spike and Rarity?
1243952 First clop story I ever wrote, so I was more focused on writing the clop and getting use to the concept than the story at the time. If you want newer, more accurate, and story oriented material go read one of my other two clop stories that have actual plots.
1244502
I can accept that. Lord knows I have enough trouble writing decent clop myself. :)
1247435 It takes some getting used to, that's for sure. It also doesn't help that you listened to James who was to busy flirting with the female reader to stop laughing. Connotation.