All the major/minor characters all have a big party! A character named Spectrum Soar goes on a crazy adventure and has intercourse with all of the Mane+Minor characters that I could think of when writing this. And yes I know you've been asking for this story for a long time, but stop complaining because it's finally here!
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My hope is to make you do these when reading this.
721231 Greatest comment ever.
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Wow not a single one of you got the point of the story did you?
AHAHAHA! Now THAT was good. And I get what you're saying. No one else here seems to get the lesson. But don't worry, I do! So that should restore a little faith in the internet.
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOAR NOW!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MOAR NOW!!!!
Oh, an anyone who says this sucks should go screw a post!
I have NO idea what just happened, but I like it.
One thing good about this story is the the spelling and grammar are well done (proper use of punctuation, no typos, no run-ons). However, that only accentuates how bad it is.
This may not be the dumbest story I've ever read, (and it's dumb) but it is the most pointless. Your character has a bunch of sex, then something happens, and then a little more sex. I'm not sure what happened because I was so put off that I skipped through it.
Two bits of advice:
1) If you're going to swear, do it. Censoring just looks lame. Just who are you trying to impress.
2) Sexual prowess can define a character, but there's more to it than that, especially without any added context. As is, I'm inclined to think of Spectrum Soar as more of a manwhore than a playboy.
Oops, someone doesn't get the point of the story!
Oops, someone doesn't get the point of the story! I like how they are giving me a serious review of this story as if it is their job when I just wrote this because someone asked me to.
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