Twilight Sparkle is given the task of be ringing back a long lost friend of the Princesses. But when that friend has a hard time remembering his past, how will she handle it?
(This story includes a character of my own making. It may be similar to some others out there but I assure you that I came up with it on my own. )
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hmm, potential is high, main character can summon a sword without even thinking, and decent grammar. I think I found a good story.
Its has good potential, just feels a little rushed. And the grammar here and there needs a little patching up. At the moment if nothing changes its a good story, but it could be a great story if more effort is put in.
It was going good this story as well, sigh. The ending is totally rushed and to be blunt, rubbish. Its basically ruined it for me, so sorry, but I'm going to have to un-fav it.
love it so far!! :D
6042910 woah that was like the complete opposite of constructive critisizimxDhowever I think that the story Was very good besides the Sort of rushed feeling and autocorrect issues. Anyways! I loved it and. I am excitedt0 read the next one:D
6057525 Well I'm blunt and tell people straight-ish. Wether thats in one words to an essay, depends on how strong i feel and if i can be bothered.