• Member Since 27th Mar, 2013
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BurningBright


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What happens when a foal is seperated from the herd early, at less than a year old a pony can go feral but survive without a herd, the question to ask though is once they've gone can that part of them ever come back? Also does a crusade end when a crusaders quest is complete or is there something more?

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Comments ( 9 )

The pacing isn't the greatest, but at the same time, the story is intriguing and entertaining. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Thanks, I've not tried writing anything this long before, you're literally getting the chapters as fast as I'm writing em. It's good ta get some feedback ^-^

Interesting story. I'll read it to completion and give it a thumbs up. Making it 9.

5953771 ya may be waiting awhile then, I have MANY more chapters planned ^-^ just needed a couple of days to reassemble my brain after 16,500 words inside 5 days *-*

Fascinating - thanks for the story so far!

7682815 working on it, sorry it's taking so long been hospitalised for a bit.

7682944 what sent you there hope your ok

7683060 it's more like an endless barrage of tests, I have Primary Progressive M.S and an extremely potent sleep disorder, as a combination it's unusual and means lots of tests.

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