A joker wrapped in mystery, who doesn't like a good mystery?
When a soldier from a war long past, who used to be part of the Equestrian guard forces wakes up from her two hundred and five year slumber to find that everything is drastically different from her memory will she be able to keep going? Will she be able to find a reason to keep going amidst all the pain and death the wastelands of her home seem to be filled with?
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I'm going to slow the updates. A warning to everypony I start off slow to let you get a feel for the characters so you can see how events effect them
The description reminds me of pink eyes xD
Yeah I got inspiration from it I wondered how an adult from the time would act and decided to try my hand at it. Pink Eyes is a masterpiece to me tugs at your heart strings but more adult concepts are somewhat lacking due to age, so I wanted to see how adults might react. To be honest I try to base characters on ways I've felt before so they seem more... alive so to speak.
Anyways time for an update I did in my spare time at well... where I am at day I don't need to reveal too much about myself or I wouldn't be an E. Nigma would I?... Yeah that kind of joke and to make people realize I wouldn't divulge too much about myself is why I chose the name Equine Nigma. Anyways I'm going to put the finishing touches and refine the next chapter
By the way the next chapter takes a turn for the silly fair warning.
Oh I thought I'd ask from here, anyone think it'd be a good idea for me to try a DOA cross over?
Well with Skyrim Skyward sword and some work I'll be slowing the updates. Oh heads up I'll be making a change in the typical story format, I'll be writing through the eyes of more than just Storm Chaser from now on, the central story line will still be with Storm but support characters story lines building up to the climax will be interspersed
I found free time at work Chapter 6 Stray strut is complete
"Fall Out"
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Well I had a good 2 week run but as they say all over the internet when someone messes around. This is why we can't have nice things. I'm cancelling this series if no one cares fine if enough people care I may sporadically update.
Side note I'm scrapping other stories I've been working on because really why bother I try to make a psychological piece where you can see how they react and why they react and people criticize me on the title so something with me goofing off will be worse. Anyways I'll check the comments sporadically if you care just leave a comment if not well... guess I get more time to do my work.
Oh and a big thank you to Trill who has taught me I suck at the biggest form of stress relief I have. I'll quit writing stories now and never return because clearly a typo in the title made with 4 years of having 4 hours of sleep a night, having a fever of 103 degrees, and dealing with someone's constant need to have attention lest she try and kill herself, means that I suck at writing and should quit.
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You should consider this:
You're whining is like a baby's
Who doesn't get the fact
That we don't have rabies
Pull together your act
Write it or not, I don't care
But I'll say this so you're aware:
The best author's just don't sit and stare
To see if there are readers out there.
We might comment, we might not.
We might read or leave it to rot.
Somepony tell me why I should read,
Maybe I will, I might take heed.
If you want readers, don't berate
Us, or throw at us your hate
'Cause we don't comment on
Your story here, nuthin wrong
With that, man! We might not
Have sumthin to say, All I got
From what you've said is how
You've given up, is this story dead now?
Equine Nigma, you whiny shit.
I don't care 'bout your life one bit.
I love Kkat, ratmage and Ponyman,
But you've just ensured that ya lost a fan.
I'll track this shit you call a fic
If you give me good reason.
Or I'll trash it like a total d*ck
And give you the shoulder that's freezin.
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Think on that, and give me a response that's at the same level of your age, not your shoe size. I hate people who think anonymity gives them the right to be an asshole. I do not wish to be one, either. If this offends you, I apologize in advance. I didn't want it to come to that, I wished to merely tell you what I thought of your attitude. Please try to be self sufficent. Don't judge those that read without leaving comments, they just don't feel like it. Give me a reason to read, and I will. Thank you for your time.
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Anna Logue
SUPERIOR POSTERIOR
Sweeterthanyou
Hungry_Ger_man
Overlord of Ponies Shored
Lovesthefuzzydice
Everyone-Hates_Haters
Gator's_Gonna_Gate.
Fast paced, impervious to bullets, and tons of Kkat's ponies. This can either go real bad or real swell.
A bit early for singing eyh? There isn't much left of the pegasi that woke up in last chapter i guess. It feels too soon.
This is the wierdest story ever.
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yes. I have read trough all these chapters, and i have to admit they are bad.
The night is darkest just before the dawn, to go up you must first have been down.
That said look at Kkat now back to you. Look at Kkat now back to your fic.
Formatting, flow, paceing, sentence structuring, not posting in canterlot speak unless it is Trixie. Relateable ponies, antagonists and protagonists alike. A premise that blows your fucking mind. Compared to Kkat you have to admit to not being on par (yet). Because trough that realisation you can begin as a student of what you call your stress relief and I call love.
That said only hard work can get you there, and reading. Lots of reading. Study your favourite author. Draw lessons from her story, how she formats it, how she formulates things, how she brings back the most seemingly unimportant item later on as something of value. So long as you are willing to put your human gift to use and work for it.
Humans and yourself are amazing individuals. Look at you taking your first steps into creating what is essentially art, but it is unfinished. The amazing fingerpaintings of a child and you could be so much more. Here can I ? Give you an internet hug?
To be honest I was whining because the guy didn't even give it a chance before making a comment on a title I made when I was doped up on antibiotics because the fever was part of a staff infection :/... in all fairness... I probably should have died from it.
I would like to see this continued, Please. I would like to see what becomes of it. If you wish not to continue, then why keep it up? There is a 'delete' button. I suggest you do some spring cleaning, and get this fic looking a bit better. when you do, I'll try to read without cringing. I cannot stand mistakes, which is why the fic I've been writing still has yet to be be posted.
Take it from me: An epic tale is in the making here, you just need to fix it p, fine tune it. No one wants to drive a lemon. Turn it into something better than you ever imagined it. My fic started as a 7 sentence side OC in a friend's fic. Now, I've got about 12 or so chapters planned.
I agree with alot of what Super Big Mac just said.
If you love writing, keep it up! Me and my friend for example have been working on a fanfic for several months without publishing it (will we ever?) mainly because we have so much fun working on it.
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Also, a small tip, I know it feels great making excuses sometimes but even if they are true most people will only see it as a sort of... whining (
And about all the morbid talk...
Don't be upset, just think; what would Pinkie Pie do/say/blow up?
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would:
do
say SURPRISE!
and
blow up TEH WERRLD
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And THAT, colts and fillies, is the true origin of Fallout: Equestria.
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why doesn't Storm Chaser just bitchslap her and tell her to settle the fuck down or have her tongue removed by force? Not like she can't do it.....
hey. hey I LIKE this concept. some of the stuff I don't like, but tough cookies right? I'm not the author. YOU ARE. You decide the ultimate fate. I'm tracking this. I love Fallout Equestria stories, but I only follow five. out of the bazillions....five.
Project Horizons
Heroes
Project Respawn
Daily Unlife
The Centurion
I only track ones I like, and think have potential.
Ponder that.