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It's all been leading up to this. He had his ship, his crew, and his target, all that was left was taking it. "Dinky, load the chain shot!"

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Politicalunrest2400 #1 · Apr 30th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Official Review: "Captain Button!"
Link: Captain Button!
Description: "It's all been leading up to this. He had his ship, his crew, and his target, all that was left was taking it. "Dinky, load the chain shot!"

Pulse pounding adventure on the high seas! Which ends up being a cute slice of life story!... oh... and there's Sweetie Bell ... which makes this even cuter!

8/10 Official Contest Score/ For Writing Quality And Originality: Clean, and crisp writing that waists not a word, in forging this epic and surprisingly sweet adventure/ slice of life story. The characters are all unique and interesting, and though there might be a bit of an odd moment at the end with the mom (Very... very scary moment haha) that distracts slightly from a potent ending, this story gets two thumbs WAY way up for awesome! Additionally the twist at the end was really cool, and added a lot to the story.

3/5 For Family Friendliness: With some violence, and some slightly graphic depictions, i would not suggest this story to those under the age of 10. Also... why is the mom reading what equates to Master and Commander with blood and gore galore and references to drug use and sex, to a very young child? wtf mom! haha

Comment: I loved this pulse pounding, adventure on the high seas, swashbuckling and surprisingly sweet slice of life story. It reminded me of when my parents read to me as a kid! Not only that but the characters are unique, hard hitting, and despite the very short nature of one shots, it fleshes them out extremely well. I hope there is a follow up story!

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